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Published: 2012-02-16 18:52:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3516; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 36
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Description 1 - Greed Army [link]
2 - Apple Soldiers [link]
3 - Wildfire Legions [link]
4 - Winged Furies [link]
5 - Coming Home (here)

STORY TIME!

It was over. The fighting, the death... The elements of Laughter and Loyalty; they had saved Equestria.

Coming back Pinkie had insisted they head for Sugarcube Corner, "it's where everypony'll be, Dashie!" She'd then produced balloons from somewhere and floated on ahead whilst the rainbow-maned pegasus watched uneasily, still uncomfortable with using her wings.

Walking up to her home village Rainbow Dash found the sight surreal. Everything looked so battered, the cloudy sky adding to the ghostly feel of the formerly bustling village. Sugarcube Corner was a mess; buildings damaged by weather, fire and who knows what else, yet the survivors of the war were returning. Her pink friend was chatting to the cheerful Derpy, who seemed none the worse for wear, and Granny Smith plus some of the foals had evidently got there a little ahead of her and Pinkie; the Apple family were busy reuniting. Applejack was in tears, sobbing into her grandma's shoulder, whilst Big Mac, his mane cut short for battle, nuzzled Apple Bloom, a look of contentment coming over him.

"I suppose, to some ponies, family really is the most important thing..." mumbled the blue pegasus.

"RAINBOW DASH! IT'S RAINBOW DASH!"

Glancing towards her name she saw a pair of foals rushing towards her, her biggest fan and her friend's little sister.

"Is it true you saved Equestria?"

Rainbow Dash smiled at the familiar faces, "Hey Sweetie Bell, hey Scootaloo... Guess I did..."

"I KNEW you could! Tell us about it, please?"

Behind the foals Rainbow Dash saw Rarity and Spike. Rarity seemed unusually frail, her mane hurriedly styled and far from its usual perfection, and Spike too seemed different... Still, if even half the rumours of the "Greed Army" were true then that was to be expected. The small dragon seemed to be looking for somepony and Rainbow Dash could guess who; not a discussion she wanted to have anytime soon.

She smiled weakly and said her greetings, accepting praise but avoiding answers when she could. Applejack had hugged her before breaking back into tears. It seemed that Fluttershy would not be joining them. Ever. Rainbow Dash felt her stomach twist at the news. She'd heard the rumours but... This was all too blatant. No one was surprised when she said she needed rest. Big Mac directed her to some of the temporary beds that had been set up in the best maintained homes.

Laying her head down on a dirty but soft pillow Rainbow Dash shut her eyes and was met with a wave of memories...

Deep the dark and shattered Canterlot castle she and Pinkie had passed a dark room before going onto where the elements were kept. The tired pegasus screwed up her eyes and forcefully directed her thoughts; the element room. The door was unlocked because of-... Rainbow Dash bit her lip. The elements... She and Pinkie had found their elements and, donning them, nothing had happened. She'd been crying... Pinkie had come up to her and nuzzled her gently and from that a warmth had spread through her and then outward to Equestria, a wave of Loyalty and Laughter to neutralise the magical corruption... They'd saved everypony...

...Because they got to the elements...

...Because Twilight had unlocked the door...

...Because Twilight had been in the dark room...

...Because Twilight... Had...

Sleep finally took Rainbow Dash's mind, leaving one last memory as it did so.

Celestia was dead.

I have no idea why I picked this art style, felt right but I still regret it. Oh well... FINISHED THE ATG WEEK! And only about a month late!
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Comments: 28

JNinelives [2015-07-05 01:56:04 +0000 UTC]

I really liked this story!
Especially your retelling of how Rainbow Dash refused to use her wings, that was especially poignant.
And Big Mac's determination - I like seeing his character developed, and you did it well.
Finally, the fact you left Twilight 'till last - so that we are wondering: what happened to her?

Black and white suits this scene.
I'm sure that's how it would have seemed from Rainbow Dash's point of view.
And such events would be a mix of emotions - relief, and joy, but also coming to terms with the shock and trauma of what's happened, and the loss.

Overall, a very imaginative story, I quite enjoyed it .

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HareTrinity In reply to JNinelives [2015-07-05 21:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story/art/artistic choices.

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JLBarnett [2014-10-26 23:59:01 +0000 UTC]

I think that Mac tracking down Fluttershy to kill her, instead of say doing it in immediate protection of Applejack means that the relationship between Dash and the Apples will be very strained.

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HareTrinity In reply to JLBarnett [2014-10-27 01:18:33 +0000 UTC]

True, though I can rather imagine ponies, especially Dash, not wanting to know the details after hearing about Fluttershy's death, given that either she'd have been killed by corrupted ponies or become one and likely died attacking her friends. I think it would take her a long time to ask for details at any rate.

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UltiMeef [2013-08-10 02:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Pls tell me what happened to Twilight!!!!!!

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HareTrinity In reply to UltiMeef [2013-08-14 14:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't have any particular story attached to this, but if I had to guess I'd say that circumstances (and possibly Celestia herself) forced Twilight to kill her, and then Twilight was caught in the blast of magic leaving the body. That or Twilight found her dying and couldn't handle it. Either way, one or both of those two are responsible for Equestria's magic going weird.

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LisaWolf [2013-07-16 07:40:14 +0000 UTC]

Very interesting, if you do make a full story out of this, will definitely be worth reading.

Would love to know what happen with Twilight, and how Celestia died. The sub-texted is pretty deep.

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HareTrinity In reply to LisaWolf [2013-07-16 13:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!


I am taking note that people want this to be a proper story.

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LisaWolf In reply to HareTrinity [2013-07-16 21:04:30 +0000 UTC]

Mmm if it does come out to being a fully story. I know one Youtuber that will most likely do an audio recording of it. He generally sticks to stuff off Fimfic though.

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serwalt [2013-06-02 22:31:38 +0000 UTC]

i just sang the coming home song

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HareTrinity In reply to serwalt [2013-06-03 20:59:56 +0000 UTC]

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FattyMation [2013-05-05 21:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Where's fluttershy?

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HareTrinity In reply to FattyMation [2013-05-05 21:43:07 +0000 UTC]

In this story? She didn't make it.

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Sunheart1 [2012-11-30 02:08:32 +0000 UTC]

what happened to twilight and celestia????!!!! WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!?????????

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HareTrinity In reply to Sunheart1 [2012-12-04 13:19:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying not to connect any specific storyline to the event in my mind but I do believe Twilight killed Celestia. Maybe she had to.

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Sunheart1 In reply to HareTrinity [2012-12-04 21:29:05 +0000 UTC]

oooooh thanks ^^

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faithdakitty [2012-09-26 01:43:07 +0000 UTC]

I love the whole story line!

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HareTrinity In reply to faithdakitty [2012-09-26 13:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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faithdakitty In reply to HareTrinity [2012-09-26 19:14:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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PlatinaStar [2012-08-17 17:35:28 +0000 UTC]

This needs more fans! This is pretty awesome! ^^

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HareTrinity In reply to PlatinaStar [2012-08-17 23:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you! I might write the story out properly sometime.

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Zoblire7 [2012-07-20 08:01:47 +0000 UTC]

You should really write this sometime that would be awesome just felt like checking back to see if you had

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HareTrinity In reply to Zoblire7 [2012-07-20 11:30:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh! Thanks, my to-do list is just a tad long at the mo. We'll see!

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Zoblire7 [2012-04-09 05:01:20 +0000 UTC]

Is here an actual story that this is based on sounds like it could be a very interesting read more fleshed out

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HareTrinity In reply to Zoblire7 [2012-04-09 15:18:08 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thanks! I just made it up as I went along. Am considering writing it properly.

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CupnCake In reply to HareTrinity [2012-04-29 00:15:11 +0000 UTC]

I want to read it!!!
What happened to Twilight?
What happened to Celestia?

I need to know!!

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deathnotefan88 [2012-02-17 15:21:46 +0000 UTC]

wow...

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HareTrinity In reply to deathnotefan88 [2012-02-17 19:32:04 +0000 UTC]

...Yep. :/

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