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Axe-Cell [2013-10-20 07:58:04 +0000 UTC]

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Well here's a little something that one rarely sees in your gallery, miss. The combination of stardust-like effects surrounding Artemis and the blue-purplish background adds a dash of mysticism to her, something that is oh-so-commonly attributed to Artemis months after I've watched you (which was a long time ago). The amount of clean-white smoothness of her attire, along with the previously mentioned aura and background, adds more to Artemis's peace-liking nature, I believe. Blue, gold, and white? They are a pleasant combination of colours, after all.

I like how you'd done her hair in a way that shows that she is in the air levitating, and how they happen to be hiding her Sugar Glider ears. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g… " width="17" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="100" title="Giggle"/> Got to love how you'd drawn each individual lock of her hair to show the direction that Artemis had turned from, though I may have to suggest that you do not apply even a tiny bit line-art. Using the end of Artemis's hair on her left side (from Artemis's point-of-view, that is), the line-art gave her hair a shape that is not even found in anime, from what I've seen. It's true that a lot of anime characters have outrageous hairstyles, but I don't think any of them are claw-shaped, in my opinion for the end of Artemis's hair. You could try to give it a silky edge instead to add a soft texture to Artemis's hair. Oh, and you've done a considerately good job on her Sugar Glider tail, miss,

Her attire adds to her elegance in the air, and I like how her sleeves are done even if they are way too large. Then again, at least they're not trailing on the ground if she does let her arms down, which is a good thing. Her bottom-wear may be considered somewhat revealing, but at least they're not too revealing to the audience. Still, it's a nice addition that her belts (that's a pouch that peeking around her waist, right?) are acting as a sort of hold for her bottom-wear, I believe?

Anyways, back onto my analysis regarding Artemis's attire, the shine of gold on her top-wear, her sleeves, her belt, and her oh-so-elegant-boots matches the star-shines in the background, along with the sapphire pieces on her attire, looks rather magnificent, though they do seem to be too shiny in such a calming environment that the background is showing. Then again, it may be possible that the is somewhere in the unseen foreground, so I'll keep quiet on this matter. About the wings on her boots... you've drawn them in quite a lovely style, though the left feather-wing on her right boot looks thicker when compared to the remaining three. Oh, and is it intentional that Artemis only has one knee-high sock?

Overall, you've done a rather marvellous work with your anime style of Artemis, miss. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I should add an apology as well for having written such a long critique, and my tips on improvement are somewhat merged with my compliments to your style. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="384" title="LOL"/> Hopefully that they help, miss~

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Batmansss [2014-08-05 23:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Pretty....

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BillyNikoll [2014-06-22 09:46:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!

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BattyBytes [2013-10-22 00:42:59 +0000 UTC]

WOW. She looks gorgeous~ ; v ;  I honestly don't know which form I like better.  Excellent work!

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Valerie-Fire-Blossom [2013-10-21 22:29:47 +0000 UTC]

This is so pretty and amazing! The design is flawless, everything looks so amazing and perfect! You did very well on this dear, your anime is perfect <333

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Lubia193 [2013-10-20 09:58:09 +0000 UTC]

soooo cooooooooool !!!

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