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Ranma-SUN [2015-03-05 01:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Post the unedited version
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Prodigy187 [2014-08-29 05:05:09 +0000 UTC]
Cool Story Dood
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nomadgreece [2013-05-01 13:32:54 +0000 UTC]
nice story with nice end
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Haseo-Himura In reply to nomadgreece [2013-05-01 17:23:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. It's the first transformation story that I've ever written. People seem to like it.
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Thief-of-Flames [2011-09-24 01:34:48 +0000 UTC]
Blush....Um thanks. Oh you saw the paint drawing I did right? I need you stats for something like that.
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Dopplegager [2011-08-22 03:15:23 +0000 UTC]
Nice concept. Would love to see what happens next.
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Dopplegager [2011-08-22 03:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment, and as for what happens next....who knows
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Volk-oseba [2011-05-24 03:55:00 +0000 UTC]
Your word choice could be better too... Hell, if one day I had the stomach for it, I'd edit this... but right now I'm kinda shocked that you wrote something like this to begin with O.o
Then again, after reading Story of O, this is actually pretty tame... anyway, there are a few psychological themes in this that aren't played out to their full potential... potential though... as far as creepy poorly written fetish stories go, this actually has a bit.
Quite honestly, I think the English professor i've had for the past 4 semesters would actually be sick enough to like this if it didn't have all those mistakes or clumsy style choices... (heck, he assigned Story of O... he has to be pretty sick minded...)
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AccumulatingCancer In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-06-19 03:21:19 +0000 UTC]
Your professor, ASSIGNED you that book?
Is that even allowed?
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-24 13:23:08 +0000 UTC]
I have issues so leave me alone.
Thanks, I shall work to over come my mistakes. And just who is your Professer?
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Volk-oseba In reply to Haseo-Himura [2011-05-24 17:52:29 +0000 UTC]
Hey, I said you're strange but I never said I wasn't willing to accept that
This professor... well... let's just say he's the first professor I've ever had who drops the F bomb at least once per class.
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-24 18:07:55 +0000 UTC]
Yay I'm accepted!
Wow, sounds like my kind of professor!
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Volk-oseba In reply to Haseo-Himura [2011-05-24 18:14:17 +0000 UTC]
And yes, I think you would like him. I don't know if you'd like his class or not, but there are plenty of people who drop his class and continue to talk to him outside of class... he's quite a character...
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-24 18:19:03 +0000 UTC]
Sounds it! Where the heck does he teach?
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Volk-oseba In reply to Haseo-Himura [2011-05-24 18:21:50 +0000 UTC]
A little community college between nowhere and a lake.
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Volk-oseba In reply to Haseo-Himura [2011-05-24 18:27:21 +0000 UTC]
lol
I believe he used to be at the University of Chicago, but he moved to a town... between Green Bay and Milwaukee. (There, specific enough?)
One of the few places in the country that calls a drinking fountain a "bubbler."
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-24 18:43:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow! that is far away from me. I live in Virgina. Damn............
A bubbler? That's my dad after he eat beans..............Sorry had to.
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-25 03:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Ah, Some times other times it's silent.............and very deadly
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Volk-oseba In reply to Haseo-Himura [2011-05-25 03:34:15 +0000 UTC]
It actually depends partly on what was eaten... mix the silent but deadly food with the less silent and less deadly food, and you've got loud and deadly.
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-25 03:38:44 +0000 UTC]
It's all deadly if comes from my dad
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Haseo-Himura In reply to Volk-oseba [2011-05-24 13:21:34 +0000 UTC]
Wow............ I don't know how to feel after these comments..........I happen to hate english and I not good at it either.......But that all then same for the comments......I just try again I guess
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TF-Viewer [2011-05-13 09:54:15 +0000 UTC]
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