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HauntedDragon005 — Despair
Published: 2006-10-21 11:51:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 40; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description He makes me feel safe.
That's why I want him to hold me.
"I'll do what I can to help you," he told me.
I want him to hold my hand and say
that one day, everything will be okay.
It's when he's hugging me I feel,
like nothing can ever hurt me.
That's why I want him to hold me.
I want him to save me from all of this despair.

He can never know why I feel this way,
I love him too much to
ask him to carry this burden.
I don't want to taint his goodness.
I just want him to hold me and say
that one day, everything will be okay.
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Comments: 2

moon-bunnies [2006-11-27 03:48:23 +0000 UTC]

It's very beautiful. Of course it makes me curious as well, but I'm not going to ask. You really get the feeling of a longing in this poem, it's very nice, it fits how I'm feeling right now. But it doesn't seem so 'despair'-y as the title suggests... maybe even a little hopeful? A loss of hope is a bad, bad thing.

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to moon-bunnies [2006-11-27 16:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Yeah I guess it's not so 'despair'-y, but that's what he's saving me from so in an indirect way it's all about the despair. Loss of hope is definitely bad.

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