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HauntedDragon005 — Dose of Reality
Published: 2007-02-05 20:55:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description
Listless hours go by without feeling.Still not knowing all the answers.
Once friendly faces disperse into
the crowds and become one of them.
Like that one song that talks about
losing a friend somewhere along in the bitterness.
And he's not really there.
I touched, I talked to him, I felt him,
he was there and he was real.
But I looked into his eyes and
they were as listless as I felt.
They're all talking to me.
Many people keep thanking me.
They are all filled with dillusions of
me being heroic.
All I was concerned with was
stopping a hangover.
The worry and concern keep invading me.
Dreams of cookies in pies, too much pepper
in a sandwich, and the insults being laid upon me.
I felt more in my dream than upon waking.
I just surrender to my sleeping refuge.
I guess we all needed reminding
that life is unexpected.
It's too real, I still have not really been able
to accept that it happened.
But in the glass I look older,
that's proof enough.
They stay green for longer now,
I never thought I would long for the brown.
Comments: 2
Me gusta me gusta... i have to go now, lunch has just begun, but to be brief, I like how I get the feelings from this... I just don't think you ought to feel those. Alhtough whether you still do, I don't know, but... yes... whatever, probably better to talk with you in real life.
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Oh this was my reaction the day after when I finally knew he was alright. I'm feeling loads better now. But this made for a powerful poem, or at least I like this one better than the other one. Thanks for your concern and I'm glad you liked the poem.
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