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Published: 2007-05-12 17:09:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 50; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description The person I never thought I would become,
I am.

I didn't know how or when it happened but,
I am.

The thing is, I don't like that part of me,
because that is not who,
I am.

He knows me,
He sees me,
And he saw me before I did,
And he sought me out.

He's found me,
And now he's here,
And we're finally face to face, again.

When he's with me... that's who,
I am.
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Comments: 6

LoLa-Lost-Heart [2007-05-31 01:37:58 +0000 UTC]

i keep reading he but where did this he come from....is this the he im thinking of or is it another he?

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to LoLa-Lost-Heart [2007-05-31 06:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Yeah there's the a he in there. I'm not sure what he you are thinking of.

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moon-bunnies [2007-05-13 02:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Self-explanatory only if you know what's going on... otherwise, there's this mystical element to it no, I do know the explanation, I'm just saying to a third-party reader the poem is different

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to moon-bunnies [2007-05-13 04:09:44 +0000 UTC]

ah that's true. So did you like it? What do you think? I don't want it to sound like I'm dependent on that person, just that I'm myself in his company. I'm myself without his company too, but it's just trying to describe the friendship a little.

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moon-bunnies In reply to HauntedDragon005 [2007-05-13 18:24:05 +0000 UTC]

it comes across straight and true... meaning that channels itself, not the other way around. makes for good poetry indeed, and i think it really does describe your friendship.

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HauntedDragon005 In reply to moon-bunnies [2007-05-15 14:50:06 +0000 UTC]

thank you, I'm glad it seems realistic. I haven't shown him yet. I should do that... Actually it's supposed to be spoken word, I recorded it on my phone. The next time I see you, I'll let you listen to it.

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