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i dont like the face but the rest is cool and i love the weapon!
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I like the colours, the dress and the armory, bout you could practice a bit on anathomy, like the shape of the chin and the proportions. I'm not sure about a gray background either. But you do have the fantasy and the talent. Keep it up!!
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She looks really good, I wish I could draw weapons like that one!
Also her hairstyle looks very nice
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proportions are off, the arm on the left is actually bending backwards, the head has a rather odd shape the midsection is facing the wrong way in relation to the rest of the body, please use the pen tool when inking your work, the eyes are off from each other in proportion, Also there is some question as to the costume design. The costume doesn't express some sort of style or trait about the character, also the brown and turquoise colors are off from each other (a good color wheel/color theory would fix this nicely) the background color seems wrong. If your not going to draw a background, then it would be better to have the background as white, and then prehaps use the airbrush tool to make the character seem like it is surrounded by light. The shadows are off since the highlights on the armor and the shadows from the chin are conflicting. The hair is off in that if the character was facing forward, she should have quite the bald spot.
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Thank you for your critique. It's incredibly useful.
I know I really need to work on my proportions and I definitely see what you mean with the eyes, midsection, and arm.
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I like the colour scheme you've used. The anatomy in the upper half - torso upwards - is really good. The thighs however, need a bit of work. They're out of proportion to the body.
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Very pretty job on the armor and the axe! Very well done! Good use of shading!
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The armor is nice and the weapon is too. I like the colors too.
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The armor and especially the axe are very well done -- color and shading really give it some sense of mass. After looking at some of your other stuff, I'm surprised you didn't do a background for this. Some of the architecture renderings are very well done as well, and if you could add these two different types together (figure and landscape) the results would speak for themselves.
Some things you need to sit down a practice are: heads, hair, and hands (which are conveniently concealed from view). There is a disconnect right now between the cartoonish style of these features and the fully rendered style of the rest of the picture. Once you bring up to these parts to same level as your rendering of buildings/clothing/equipment, you can incorporate them into your style and everything will start to click into place. My suggestion would be start drawing from life and then work your way into a more "manga-esque" style.
Keep up the good work!
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Pretty good job! Her face looks a little off...maybe it's a bit too small compared to the rest of her body?? The coloring is good though!
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You've got talent in coloring. But you have to practice your outlining skills. The most disfigured parts of her are her face, thighs and hips.
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Your really good at colouring, what program do you use?
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Photoshop 7. You could probably get it for free on bit torrent or pay next to nothing, <$100 for it. I tried Jasc Paintshop, and I don't like it. Photoshop is the way to go.
And thanks for the comment ^_^
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i have photoshop CS
i dunno what number it is.
XD <3
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that would be version 8.0
i wish companies went back to the old way of naming there versions. at least you knew what was what then
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