XXclovahh [2010-02-08 02:49:33 +0000 UTC]
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The fur shading is ok but you cannot really see where the light source is coming from. It looks like you just put random patches of light and dark black. Dont worry, Im horrible at shading so I dont know how accurate my idea is. ^ ^' The leg anatomy is good but the shoulder blade should be a little more pointed. Also the tail shouldnt be 5 feet long. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD - "/>The background is good but its a little boring. Unless this is just going to be something like a snapshot then its fine. If you want to tell a story about Scourge to those people who have no idea who he is you could have made a background like the twolegplace or something. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Shrug - "/> Just a suggestion.The face is my overall favorite. You can see how Scourge knows he is the toughest cat around. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin) - "/>
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Hawkheart1 In reply to XXclovahh [2010-02-08 02:54:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique ^^ Yeahh the shading isn't the best, I was trying to make it look like it was coming from either above or in front looking towards the light somewhat.. I ALWAYS (always.) have serious tail troubles XD I was trying to make it like he was sitting and it was coming up behind him o0; I guess it was made a bit too long.. ; Yeah I probably should have done a background, I was just feeling REALLY (really.) lazy..
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Sirmaril [2010-09-19 12:10:50 +0000 UTC]
So cute!!! Good paint style and face expression
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Hawkheart1 In reply to Sirmaril [2010-09-19 13:02:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank youuuu <3
Sirmaril In reply to Sirmaril [2010-09-19 12:17:14 +0000 UTC]
Sorry fof my english
XXclovahh [2010-02-08 02:50:18 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Love his smirk. His eyes are great too!
Hawkheart1 In reply to XXclovahh [2010-02-08 02:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Thank you
XXclovahh In reply to Hawkheart1 [2010-02-08 02:52:35 +0000 UTC]
No problem!
Frostyfur-Studios [2010-02-08 02:24:36 +0000 UTC]
Wow =o i really like the expression on his face, very smirky
Hawkheart1 In reply to Frostyfur-Studios [2010-02-08 02:24:58 +0000 UTC]