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HawkwingXx — 'Wanted' Excerpt
Published: 2011-08-07 00:20:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 162; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description      I awoke and heard it- my screams. I grazed my skin and felt it- pain. I touched it then saw it- scarlet. It trickled into my mouth and i tasted it- metalic. The smell of it tinged the air- blood. Blood everywhere.
     It covered my shredded and wounded body and I lay in a pool of it. I contained my shrieks of pain in hope that no one would find me here. For their own sake.
     They would save me- well, try to. But who would be able to save me in this condition? Maybe a whole crew of doctors, but by the time i get to the hospital, it would be far too late. Then, the only thing that would be left of me is the memory of my limp, bloody, lifeless body, burned into the back of that poor soul's mind.
     My bandmates would never know what became of me. And Aunt Natalie... all of her efforts to protact me would be wasted.
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Comments: 14

tumblinteaaa [2011-11-25 20:01:43 +0000 UTC]

wow

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HawkwingXx In reply to tumblinteaaa [2011-11-25 20:05:46 +0000 UTC]

lol is that good or bad?

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tumblinteaaa In reply to HawkwingXx [2011-11-25 20:11:33 +0000 UTC]

good. if you write something like that and its leaves people speechless.......... thats very very good

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HawkwingXx In reply to tumblinteaaa [2011-11-25 20:15:15 +0000 UTC]

lol well thanks, then

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tumblinteaaa In reply to HawkwingXx [2011-11-26 00:07:01 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!!

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airwalkwoman [2011-11-23 22:22:50 +0000 UTC]

Whoa... I like it.

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HawkwingXx In reply to airwalkwoman [2011-11-25 17:01:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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Talyasaurus [2011-08-19 04:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow! I wonder whats going to happen to her.

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HawkwingXx In reply to Talyasaurus [2011-08-19 14:59:33 +0000 UTC]

Yep... more like what DID happen to her i really should start writing it... but im too lazy

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Talyasaurus In reply to HawkwingXx [2011-08-19 18:09:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm more of the lazy one. 1 picture in 2 weeks thats me.

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HawkwingXx In reply to Talyasaurus [2011-08-19 22:08:36 +0000 UTC]

yeah ive had this book and the plot and main characters planned for like a month now and thats all ive written XD

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Talyasaurus In reply to HawkwingXx [2011-08-19 23:08:36 +0000 UTC]

I know what you mean I have this one story in my head for 4 years and all I got is the first 3 chapters.

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Miss-Zydrate [2011-08-07 00:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is amazing.

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HawkwingXx In reply to Miss-Zydrate [2011-08-07 00:27:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks I probably shouldve put "muature content" on it, though... too much blood, i guess :/

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