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hb-syik — Dearly Beloved cover first sketch
Published: 2013-09-11 02:20:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 927; Favourites: 42; Downloads: 1
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I found the first sketch to my cover of my FMA doujin Dearly Beloved! Its really dirty, as you can see haha... But I still thought it was at least a little worthy to post! Anyhow, regarding Dearly Beloved I know I hadn't gotten far in it in the first place, but I have not given up on it at all! Its just that I have recently joined some contests, group activities and I'm in my second week of school. So I will probably have the next page or 2 out next month~ Love you guys! and thank you so much for everything!!
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Comments: 3
I'll explain why I chose the ratings:
Vision 4.5
I think this is appropriate for an FMA doujin. Very well made and it's like there's a meaning to it.
Originality 3
I gave 3 because it's for a doujin and the characters may or may not be original depending on the artist.
Technique 5
I may be a random stranger but that's what's good. I don't know you so even if it's bad I can't say it's good. But what I'm saying is, it's good. I love how it's messy and dirty and I love how it's like blurred in a way that can be s clear.
Impact 4.5
Not a complete 5 but when I first saw this on my messages on one of the groups i joined, my eyes couldn't go anywhere. I saw it was amazing and sometimes that's how thumbnails are but when it's full sized, it's sometimes horrible but yours wasn't. The thumbnail and the full sized picture were both good and it's creative.
There's my critique. Sorry if I accidentally offended you. I never meant to be mean if I came across mean.
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