RandomOutput [2007-11-06 19:45:01 +0000 UTC]
I like...I like...the viewer right hand (her left) needs some work, as does the gun as it is out of proportion. I don't know if you used a ref image but things like that need it sometimes (although the more I check, I think the hand may be right and it might just be the gun messing with my head. It could also be the almost perfect profile angle at which she is holding it. That is a good thing to avoid as it tends to make things a little unnatural, just need to add a little perspective). Also a little line weight variation in the inking and some more contrast in the color (just in a few places, it looks a little flat as it is) could take this piece up to another level. I really like the piece overall though, and it does capture her well. Great work, I hope something in my ramblings may help in the future.
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