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Published: 2011-02-25 22:56:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 3899; Favourites: 124; Downloads: 239
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Description model & editing : me
photography by my lovely husband

necklace and bracelet handmade by me.
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Comments: 14

Earthymoon [2011-02-28 13:58:36 +0000 UTC]

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You look adorable. Your pose is nice. A hand on the hip with the opposite hip pushing out is great for corset shots. I only wish your right hand hadn't gotten lost in the skirt.
I could use just a tiny bit more expression in your face. You don't look emotionless but maybe a little reserved and shy. Don't let the clothes wear you. That's a bold outfit so I think a bolder facial expression would have been appropriate.
As for the editing, I appreciate the blur in an attempt to make a shallow DOF, however I don't think it was carried out well. The catch shadows from the flash are a dead give away that the BG should be in complete focus. When I'm trying to make an image look like it was shot at a shallow DOF, I remove the catch shadows, use a touch of box blur for the BG and blur whatever part of the subject is appropriate (parts outside of the focal plane). For example on this image, I would box blur the BG the most and then maybe Gaussian blur you on the right side of your body and then use stronger Gaussian blur from the thigh down.
I hope I haven't critiqued too much. I think the edit was going towards the right direction just with some technical errors. Thanks for sharing it. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā€¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

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Maleficus-Animus [2014-05-07 23:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Cute, Lolita-esque, and I like the tattoo.

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akarra [2012-03-10 07:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome - feminine and classy. The pose and outfit work well for accentuating the gaze, which is confident and playful. Thanks for sharing: you and your husband did a really great job with this!

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CROSF [2011-03-21 23:39:42 +0000 UTC]

a very beautiful photo with a nice angle and a marvelous model!!!

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HelianthusMay In reply to CROSF [2011-03-23 11:18:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you very much

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CROSF In reply to HelianthusMay [2012-04-06 04:17:44 +0000 UTC]

All the best!!

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dannsmith [2011-03-04 03:30:15 +0000 UTC]

you look perfect, fantastic pic

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HelianthusMay In reply to dannsmith [2011-03-05 17:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you

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Loffy0 [2011-03-03 22:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol cute outfit!

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libidum-extasy [2011-03-03 11:33:27 +0000 UTC]

A great shot !

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pacomontoya [2011-02-25 22:57:26 +0000 UTC]

Very cute. Love the outfit.

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HelianthusMay In reply to pacomontoya [2011-02-25 23:01:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks! I love this outfit too

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pacomontoya In reply to HelianthusMay [2011-02-25 23:05:12 +0000 UTC]

The outfit is cute, but YOU make that outfit. I usually don't just come right out and say things like that, but I just figured you should know, that you are a gorgeous girl. Your eyes have to be some of the most seductive pair of eyes I have ever seen. Again, not trying to be rude or disrespectful, just sharing a little bit of my honest opinion.

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HelianthusMay In reply to pacomontoya [2011-02-26 22:21:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank-you, that's really nice
And you're not being rude, I really appreciate the feedback

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