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Published: 2018-09-01 05:07:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 602; Favourites: 67; Downloads: 0
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Description Look, damn you, I only came here to do a thing.
The night had its moment, its breath
and you, you
had a temper, a tempter and
it was all bare.

A leg, a thin,
a meandering lot full of weeds
round your head and there you go
off that way
barely, still
noticing.

Here, an advice.
untempt your suffering.
mooch off your visions.
wrap your self(es)Vests
a(door)((n))round
simple

Do what comes
is
(not better nor worse)
than(k)

Tear a hole,
meat filled water. Do a thing.
can you.
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Comments: 13

YouInventedMe [2018-10-30 17:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Good to return to and fins this/you here.

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hell-on-a-stick In reply to YouInventedMe [2018-11-10 19:06:45 +0000 UTC]

Same to you, old beastie thou!Β 

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wellwornwings [2018-10-19 00:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Wowowowow!

i love how your words and parenthesis play together.

great piece.Β 

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hell-on-a-stick In reply to wellwornwings [2018-10-28 15:28:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, wings. Glad to see you’re about!

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PennedinWhite [2018-09-18 21:14:48 +0000 UTC]

I missed this, somehow. Shame on me!

This was quite the read, and glad you posted
something!

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hell-on-a-stick In reply to PennedinWhite [2018-11-10 19:09:31 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate that, thanks much, you there.

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PennedinWhite In reply to hell-on-a-stick [2018-11-13 15:05:52 +0000 UTC]

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blisterine66 [2018-09-16 04:32:00 +0000 UTC]

dig it

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RichardLeach [2018-09-02 11:50:08 +0000 UTC]

Hey! Glad you came to do a thing!

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crazyasusual [2018-09-02 06:30:43 +0000 UTC]

Tempting tempers will get you.


This was descriptive.Β  Nice work!

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hell-on-a-stick In reply to crazyasusual [2018-09-09 16:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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salshep [2018-09-01 06:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Look, for five damn minutes just let me be happy that you posted something new, orright?

I'll get to the tearing in due course.

<33333

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hell-on-a-stick In reply to salshep [2018-09-01 07:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Hee.

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