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Published: 2014-12-25 19:05:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 3315; Favourites: 168; Downloads: 17
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Edit: Hey guys, I'd really love some feedback on this one: I'm attempting a different method of drawing
anatomy and I'd appreciate knowing what you think of it.
Who are you, then, whom I have longed to see again? Pray tell me before I go. It is everything that I would ever wish to know. When I look back, the last thing I remember are those half-hopeful eyes on the verge of a catastrophe with nothing but thin breathing and nervous tension within you. No, here I am, and there you are. So what happened? You shone like a star—a soft, brilliant radiance, a tinge of colour in a crackling voice—and then, just like that, you faded away and left me fumbling in a sky without light.
Where did you go? Where did you go, and wherever it is, why must it be a place where I could not follow?
— Vergessenheit
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Happy holidays, everyone! <3
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Comments: 23
You have a lovely style, very soft and clean and beautiful, and just very pleasing on the eyes 
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I love this! So very nice. Don't tease, give us more.
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I am really impressed by this! The anatomy is great in this one, especially Benjamin's pose! You should to more pieces like this one, if it works well for you
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ah! thanks so much!
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What I love about this piece is that their poses seem really natural and fluid, not stiff, so really great work there! 
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thanks love
and good observation: I'll work on that
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i like the attention to contour and harsh definite lines it adds a solidity to the work. though too much so leaves little room for negative space and the soft subtle curves that a human form realistically takes. incidentally what are your sources for the poses? models? or photographs? granted i've not draw anything consistently in a long while and my own art has thus atrophied into nothingness but the principals are there for me to call on having taken a few courses etc. but i digress as I'm curious if you've signed on to any academic studies of the subject, such really helped me with anatomy.
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Thank you! And I looked at vintage photographs for the poses, and followed gestural tutorials like this one: www.youtube.com/watch?v=8j39Nq…
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trouble with photos and tutorials i found was that ones figures and forms risk becoming flat because rather than taking the 3 dimensional and making it 2 dimensional one is reiterating what is already there. still you've a well developed command of space so far i'd look to sketching friends and random people and objects and looking into a life drawing class this could go lots of places! 
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You're very welcome!
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