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HennaFaunway — -Happy Birthday-

Published: 2011-04-10 00:34:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 6141; Favourites: 202; Downloads: 43
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Description "I stared into the summer evening, the air turning mauve as the sun dipped over the copse and splashed the last rays of light across the whispering ryegrass in bars or orange. A whippoorwill called out, and another answered, until the dusk was filled with the conversations of the nocturnal fauna beneath me feet and in the towering birch trees that stood about the knoll. Above their racket I could hear my family talking and laughing on the porch several yards behind me, the clinks of ice in their cups, the sounds of forks against china, all stirred up along with the thick summer air and sweet scent of fresh ice tea.
Just a few more minutes. A few more minutes and I’d be sixteen, a few more minutes until the anniversary of the day I came into this world.
“Hey.”
I turned, and saw him moving towards me, uncertainty tugging at his heels. I knew what he was thinking; I was thinking the same as he. That kiss in the attic. The laughing, the paint, then the sudden quiet. The turning, and finally the shy feeling of his lips against my cheek. It was quick, but it happened, and it tore down the confidence and the easiness and brought with it uncomfortable awkwardness and the catch of the throat whenever our eyes met.
“Hey,” I said quietly, looking down at my hands.
Benjamin stepped forward until our shoulders were brushing, two shadows dozing in the grass, lit by the hanging pink and orange birthday lanterns hung around the porch, swinging from the old willow tree.
“Your Dad said that you’ll be sixteen in a minute,” he murmured shyly. “Thought I would keep you company for the countdown.”
“That’s very thoughtful,” I stammered, trying to hide the blush. Why did he have to kiss me? Why did he have to go and ruin everything? I didn’t want to be like this around him. I wanted the old easiness, the smiling, not the bumbling and the silence.
“Happy birthday.”
“What?”
“I said happy birthday, Sara.” He stole a quick glance at me from the corner of his eye. “You’re officially older than me, I guess.”
I laughed quietly. “I suppose so.”
This time, when I looked at him, we held each other’s gaze. I don’t know why, but we did. My chest tightened and butterflies filled my throat. I’m not sure who leaned first; perhaps it was he, but I’ll never know, but it happened; he bent his head and I tilted mine, and we kissed. His hands found mine, our noses brushed, our foreheads touched, and Benjamin and I were kissing. It didn’t feel awkward, because if he had been looking close enough, perhaps he would have seen the fireworks going off behind my eyes eyes. This time, they weren’t bad fireworks. They were beautiful. Absolutely and utterly beautiful.
I could feel heads turning and eyes fall upon us, and even Hanna calling:

“I KNEW THEY WERE GOING TO DO IT THIS WHOLE TIME!”

He pulled away, smiling sheepishly. “Everyone’s watching…sorry.”
I grinned and pulled him into me by his shirt collar, tasting his lips once again. “I’m not.”
I felt his hands unclasp mine and rest on my waist, and I leaned into him more, fingers against his shoulders, breathing him in. “Best birthday present I’ve ever gotten,” I whispered after our lips finally parted, and he laughed.
“I agree, even though I think I enjoyed it just as much as you did.”

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HOLY SHIT. This took me FIVE HOURS. FIVE. F*CKING. HOURS. So glad I finished this. I officially hate linearting. Buut, I may do it again because it makes my drawings look much more professional.

PLEASE COMMENT AND FAV; THIS TOOK A LOT OF HARD WORK.
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Comments: 91

HennaFaunway In reply to ??? [2012-05-06 16:44:13 +0000 UTC]

d'aw

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Isabelle-fox [2012-01-06 17:12:16 +0000 UTC]

i am extremely thankful that my computer didn't crash with the amazingness of all this.

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BatangPintor [2011-12-25 08:56:19 +0000 UTC]

you wrote the story? love iiit <3

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Moonstone27 [2011-09-03 01:59:30 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, I love Sara's dress

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HennaFaunway In reply to Moonstone27 [2011-09-03 03:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Moonstone27 In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-09-03 03:46:53 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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MadCamera [2011-07-30 05:31:29 +0000 UTC]

I love it so much. >_<
you need to post more on your wattpaddddd!!

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HennaFaunway In reply to MadCamera [2011-07-30 05:37:43 +0000 UTC]

I will, I will! I've just hit a writers block and I'm kind of stuck right now >.< To satiate you temporarily, I have posted another story: [link]

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LadyWrimo [2011-06-26 09:56:44 +0000 UTC]

I just had to comment to say that I love these two characters and the excerpt and the picture and yeah. I just stumbled upon this deviation after seeing your Katniss/Peeta ones, and it's so vivid and wow I love it.

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HennaFaunway In reply to LadyWrimo [2011-06-26 10:11:37 +0000 UTC]

awwh, thank you very much!

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LadyWrimo In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-06-26 10:20:07 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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ImWithCrazy [2011-06-10 00:10:50 +0000 UTC]

i love this soooo much can i do a redraw with my own characters?

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HennaFaunway In reply to ImWithCrazy [2011-06-10 05:27:30 +0000 UTC]

long as you credit me

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ImWithCrazy In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-06-11 01:12:28 +0000 UTC]

ok :3 may i just say your style is wonderful and unique

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Dancergirl88 [2011-05-29 14:16:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww, how sweet

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HennaFaunway In reply to Dancergirl88 [2011-05-29 17:17:25 +0000 UTC]

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Tbird98 [2011-05-09 01:15:35 +0000 UTC]

Looks really nice.

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HennaFaunway In reply to Tbird98 [2011-05-09 03:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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africanpearl [2011-04-22 17:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Ben is like.... "wow"

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HennaFaunway In reply to africanpearl [2011-04-22 22:25:19 +0000 UTC]

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africanpearl [2011-04-22 16:51:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh.... YAY! I love these kinds of scenes and you've created one of my favorites!

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HennaFaunway In reply to africanpearl [2011-04-22 22:25:46 +0000 UTC]

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Eve-Francesca [2011-04-15 07:29:11 +0000 UTC]

I can see why you think lineart makes your work look more professional. The lighting is gorgeous, too. It's so clear that you put five hours worth of work into this drawing.

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HennaFaunway In reply to Eve-Francesca [2011-04-15 23:28:24 +0000 UTC]

awwh, thank you very much!

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Eve-Francesca In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-04-15 23:29:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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chicken-blast [2011-04-14 05:30:32 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me of a scene from Stardust. Very nice.

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HennaFaunway In reply to chicken-blast [2011-04-14 22:36:20 +0000 UTC]

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CHERUBIM101 [2011-04-12 21:13:11 +0000 UTC]

simply beautiful

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HennaFaunway In reply to CHERUBIM101 [2011-04-12 22:23:00 +0000 UTC]

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RaisloverSakura [2011-04-11 18:11:25 +0000 UTC]

Love the lighting and the entire feel of the drawing!
Absolutely breathtaking!!

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HennaFaunway In reply to RaisloverSakura [2011-04-11 23:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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RaisloverSakura In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-04-12 00:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome!

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Yume-Inc [2011-04-11 02:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that's really cute! I love the soft, sweetness of the picture. I'm glad I decided to read what you had. x3

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HennaFaunway In reply to Yume-Inc [2011-04-11 02:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!

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harmonicaaa [2011-04-10 19:37:40 +0000 UTC]

Awwwww..

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HennaFaunway In reply to harmonicaaa [2011-04-10 19:52:17 +0000 UTC]

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Kurai89 [2011-04-10 19:36:02 +0000 UTC]

So beautiful. Really one of your best works.

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HennaFaunway In reply to Kurai89 [2011-04-10 19:53:33 +0000 UTC]

awwh, thank you!

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Caleighrg [2011-04-10 16:56:14 +0000 UTC]

That story is so cuuuute~ WHAT DID WWII HAVE TO RUIN IT ALL!? I feel so sorry for Sara having to live her whole live without him....Poor, Benjamin...

Happy Birthday, Sara!!

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HennaFaunway In reply to Caleighrg [2011-04-10 18:24:54 +0000 UTC]

I know... Lide can kinda suck sometimes.

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HennaFaunway In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-04-10 18:25:02 +0000 UTC]

*life

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jamingurl98 [2011-04-10 15:30:22 +0000 UTC]

LOVE!!!!

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HennaFaunway In reply to jamingurl98 [2011-04-10 18:24:17 +0000 UTC]

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jamingurl98 In reply to HennaFaunway [2011-04-10 18:25:12 +0000 UTC]

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LastWrites [2011-04-10 13:22:36 +0000 UTC]

ycfuxzdijoma!!! Today's my birthday!!

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HennaFaunway In reply to LastWrites [2011-04-10 18:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thats funny; Sara's birthday is actually in September, though.

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jamingurl98 In reply to LastWrites [2011-04-10 15:34:03 +0000 UTC]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY RANDOM PERSON!!!

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LastWrites In reply to jamingurl98 [2011-04-10 22:30:22 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU RANDOM PERSON!!

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jamingurl98 In reply to LastWrites [2011-04-10 22:33:18 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE WELCOME RANDOM PERSON!!!

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ianaohime-sama [2011-04-10 12:34:43 +0000 UTC]

ohmygosh it's so cute!!DD

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