Comments: 9
Jomina [2005-03-04 13:49:13 +0000 UTC]
This reminds me so much of what Im going through right now, since Jen (my wife) left the kids and I back in December... excellent work.. Touched a nerve that I didnt realize was still open... but thats the way the best pieces are, no?
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HerMiddleNameWasBoom In reply to Jomina [2005-03-06 02:53:36 +0000 UTC]
exactly. sorry to hear about that though, but at least you know that you arent the only one hurting out there
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StArLightStArBright [2005-01-14 02:08:20 +0000 UTC]
ah shawn i love the way you write, i cant explain it, but i love how you write and the words you use, its like something i can think of feeling at one point, and you just elaborate that thought so much better than i ever could. you are wonderful.
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inmyroom [2005-01-12 22:37:01 +0000 UTC]
your street seems darker now ever since you left
a brand new shade of grey
my walls are empty ever since you tore
down all i had of you
i love those lines
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