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hermiona1988 — Bleeding rose

Published: 2008-10-05 20:25:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Description Left alone in the darkness
Out of the people eyes.
Put to death by lovers
Remembering her prime times.
Maybe someday lonely person
Will look at her with smile
Asking oneself why?

Poem and photo by me
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Comments: 6

BlueSkyTides [2009-09-19 18:11:44 +0000 UTC]

I like what you have of the poem so far, but I would like to see more, I feel as though it is unfinished. But, wonderful none the less.

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BlueSkyTides [2009-09-19 18:11:40 +0000 UTC]

I like what you have of the poem so far, but I would like to see more, I feel as though it is unfinished. But, wonderful none the less.

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hermiona1988 In reply to BlueSkyTides [2009-09-20 19:37:35 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. maybe I will think of different ending. It is hard to write all your thoughts in English, but more or less I tried.

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BlueSkyTides In reply to hermiona1988 [2009-09-21 17:40:41 +0000 UTC]

You did a good job though. (:

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TwisteDreamz [2009-04-07 01:33:07 +0000 UTC]

I really don't like this shot. Again, great concept but the lighting is a bit too dark and maybe you should show the rose more.

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hermiona1988 In reply to TwisteDreamz [2009-04-07 06:19:58 +0000 UTC]

I will think about re-doing it. I will havce a few days of free time soon (Ester) so I can play with camera. Wow you are stubborn. You comment almost everything in my gallery. Thank you very much my dear.

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