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Model:Emmy
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The overall composition is good. The models face depicts an emotion, and the setting compliments it, but i have a few issues with the picture in itself:
her bra strap is showing, I don't know if it was intentional, but it is a distraction from the rest of the picture,
The limbs in the foreground fill in the rule of thirds, but your position is that of a portrait, which shouldn't have an out of focus foreground object.
The things I definitely like about the picture:
The dots under her eyes make for a focal point, and a good one at that.
The limbs that are right behind her add a graceful and natural detail to the picture.
Other slight detail work that I would suggest are:
Increase the saturation of her eyes. They are the focal point, so make sure they are breathe taking.
The lightness of the composition adds an effect of innocence, but in doing so increasing the contrast 5 points or so, maybe more, will define some lines that seem vague and dissipate lines that already seem to be fading out.
Overall: This is good work, and I commend you for it. Continue your work and studies into the whole composition and use of your models attributes to move your photos to the next level!
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Anytime. 
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Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate the suggestions and honesty.
"The limbs in the foreground fill in the rule of thirds, but your position is that of a portrait, which shouldn't have an out of focus foreground object."
I definitely agree. The reason this happened was because I was free-lensing.
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