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Hikari-chyan — Commission:Shiori
Published: 2010-09-20 14:08:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 1228; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 30
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This is a commission for . This is his original character Shiori.This deviation is only for 's use!
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Made with: Photoshop CS3, Wacom Bamboo Fun
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Comments: 13
I have to say I really enjoy all of the leggings I've sen you draw! It makes me want to wear them myself!
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This is so fun! I really like the way you did the background too, it's colorful but not too much so it doesn't distract you from the character.
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This is your best commission until now. Although there are some things that are bothering me like the bended leg, the fingers and the eyes (I suppose they must be looking in my direction, but they aren't.)
Although the skirt is lifted too high in the back (her panties are all shown, i'm betting on it!) this is your best skirt you've made. It looks thick like a real cloth but not flat. The same with the collar - it's done nicely. It makes sense why it bends. the hair is also nice. The color is cute, but there's something wrong with the hands. the one that is more far from us is bigger than the one that's closer. That's wrong. Also there's something that's bothering me about the chest. Actually about all of your works' girl chests. But I don't know what. Not in the size but in... the way they outline in the shirts.
Work on your knees!
And if you ignore my heavy critique, I bet it is very liked by the "customer" xD
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I know about the hands. I tried to fix them, but I just not good with perspective. I will work on it. Thanks for the critique.
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This has a nice amount of energy to it. I wish I was energetic like that. The colours are well done, and I like the fact there really is something in the background, too, even if it's just a pattern. Many people forget that their works look unfinished without a background (like me).
Something in her anatomy feels incorrect. It might be the bosom, or something else in the upper body. I don't know how the original creator designed the character but the bosom looks somehow like a chest belonging to an older woman. Yeah, the bosom might be a tad too low to look good.
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Thank you for the comment! It really hepled me a lot
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This is, without a doubt, beautiful!
Fantastic work as always Bacemono.
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