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Published: 2011-03-02 01:08:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 376; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 1
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Description sure, i hear voices
but that does not mean i'm crazy
i just have more friends
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Comments: 9

kittykittyhunter [2011-03-05 18:37:55 +0000 UTC]

I love it.

You can solve the Line 2 problem quite easily. ^^ "but" isn't necessary for the poem to work.

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KatharsisAmok In reply to kittykittyhunter [2011-03-13 15:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Was just thinking the same thing. ^_^ Though I would have used "doesn't" in place of does not.

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AnastasiasDecember [2011-03-04 22:35:23 +0000 UTC]

oooh cool! I could never write haiku's... they're are always too many syllables. Well done!

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hikaru-nara-kheel In reply to AnastasiasDecember [2011-03-04 22:38:07 +0000 UTC]

lol...thanx!

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AnastasiasDecember In reply to hikaru-nara-kheel [2011-03-04 22:40:01 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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gethekilla [2011-03-03 19:26:29 +0000 UTC]

true words!
I like!

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hikaru-nara-kheel In reply to gethekilla [2011-03-03 22:08:04 +0000 UTC]

lol...thanx

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ShadowBrokenMirrors [2011-03-02 01:11:50 +0000 UTC]

I like it. xD Its true and something you wouldn't think about.
But as a suggestion, maybe capitalize or accent in some way ;D
(Like italics or such)


~

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hikaru-nara-kheel In reply to ShadowBrokenMirrors [2011-03-02 01:12:48 +0000 UTC]

lol...thanx

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