RfrIce [2016-07-21 09:01:59 +0000 UTC]
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Actually this is already good character, but the armor make it kinda weird if it flow with the dress until her thighs, you can make the armor shorter to the stomach area.Maybe you can add some details on the dress or accessories so the character is different from the others, also add some yellow to her hair to make her hair more vibrant / vivid.You can add a simple background or a frame to make it more fabulous and probably some darker shade so the character will create a bold and brave impact.That is all from me, keep practicing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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LaVistSchoolDistrict [2016-07-22 18:42:22 +0000 UTC]
I write my own manga as well! (Which my DA account is dedicated to the series alone) I'll be sure to check "Misfit In Toyland" out sometime! I really like this character's costuming and the warm autumn colour palate.
Skitsowill [2016-07-21 09:10:48 +0000 UTC]
OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFU you coloring style is so clean and perfect