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Cheesegoddess [2011-07-14 00:41:39 +0000 UTC]
You did a really great job at this. You can really feel how she's feeling as well! So sad!!
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himori In reply to Cheesegoddess [2011-07-14 18:59:50 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you. I'm glad you like it.
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himori In reply to noon711 [2011-07-13 23:19:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm sure she will. Eventually. I just like to torture my characters a little ya know? What about Hani's family? They okay?
Momoko: Everyone's family is missing, and here I am crying. She thought grimly, reluctantly hugging him and burying her face into his shoulder. She couldn't bring herself to care though, because she didn't want to share his warmth with anyone. "Does that mean I can come to you whenever I'm cold?"
Oh! It's true! xD Wow I can't believe they put that in the pokedex.
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noon711 In reply to himori [2011-07-13 23:43:47 +0000 UTC]
In my mind, I've always placed Hani's family in another country far away from Pokimono, that I forget that they should stay in the country of pokimono, so I forget to make Hani worry about the family that does live there. *smacks forehead.*.....They are fine, but Hani's sickly mother may be having a tough time. (Our characters need a little torturing I do it all the time 0 u 0 )
Hani: Still holding her, his eyes look off ahead. He brings his hand to hold the back of her head. "Of course you can. I'll be here for you, whenever you need me...everyone's experiencing a loss...it hurts...a lot, I know." He nuzzles his cheek on her head, "but we'll all get through this," he smiles a bit, "I am sure of it. You won't cry for long Momo-chan, I promise."
Haha, yeap! *huggles my little torchic* > u <
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himori In reply to noon711 [2011-07-18 00:51:32 +0000 UTC]
It's not impossible, there are probably other countries other than Pokimono that we don't see. But then again it's more convenient for the story and Hani especially because he visits frequently right? How old are his siblings anyway? (Is it wrong to think that their relationship has thus far has been going too smoothly?)
Momoko: "Thank you, for everything you keep doing for me." Her eyes became wet with tears and she thanked him repeatedly through choked sobs muffled by his shirt. She didn't know what else to do. "O-okay I think I'm done now," her breath still shaky but her tears were gone. One hand slowly released the shoulder blade it had held onto and reached around herself to find his. "Did anyone ever tell you that you have guy's hands?"
GOD HANI YOU LADY KILLER! >//////<
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Umbrella-girl1995 [2011-07-13 04:56:12 +0000 UTC]
QAQ POOR MOMOKO!!!
*A 16 year old DD runs up to her*
DD: DELI!! MOMO-CHAN!!! ARE YOU ALRIGHT, DELI?!!!
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himori In reply to Umbrella-girl1995 [2011-07-13 18:45:34 +0000 UTC]
Lol she's fine, she's just in shock. Really, she makes it to the shelter mostly fine. Just traumatized. Wait a minute how did DD age so fast?
Momoko: She sobs for a minute, then wipes her tears away with her fists. "I... I'm okay. I just... I can't and they're..."
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Umbrella-girl1995 In reply to himori [2011-07-13 18:48:31 +0000 UTC]
Well, long story short. She got kidnapped by demons. They gave her something that aged her.
DD: She has a sad look on her face as she goes over and hugs her. "There, there... Everything with be alright..." She rubs her back to comfort her.
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himori In reply to Umbrella-girl1995 [2011-07-13 23:36:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, when did that happen?
Momoko: She wipes her tears away with angry fists, angry at the gods, and that she can't swim, angry at everything. And sad. Very sad. "DD-chan, we-we have to help people out of here! We have to--" she cries a little harder, choking for a moment, and then calming down. "S-sorry. Is Gurin-can alright?"
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Umbrella-girl1995 In reply to himori [2011-07-14 04:11:40 +0000 UTC]
Around a month ago~
DD: A look of sorrow appears on her face for a few moments, but it quickly goes away. "Yes... He's fine..." She stands with a brave look. "Deli! Now, let's see if we can help!"
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himori In reply to Umbrella-girl1995 [2011-07-18 01:38:14 +0000 UTC]
She has boobs now?
Momoko: She nods quickly and stands as well. "I can't swim though..." Q_Q
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Umbrella-girl1995 In reply to himori [2011-07-18 12:42:19 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but they're a b cup at best.
DD: She places a comforting hand on Momoko's shoulder. "You don't need to swim to help, deli! They are plenty of people who needs recusing from under ruble!" She gives a warming grin. "Deli, deli! And I know you have the strength for that, Momo-chan!"
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himori In reply to Umbrella-girl1995 [2011-07-19 22:14:49 +0000 UTC]
They'll get bigger, eventually.
Momoko: "Oh! OKAY! You fired me up!" She pumped her fist into the air. "I'm coming guys I'm coming! Oh by the way, what are you going to do now that we can't live in Ice Bay anymore? Are you going to open another ice cream shop?"
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Umbrella-girl1995 In reply to himori [2011-07-19 23:05:32 +0000 UTC]
Lolz.
DD: She glances as her as she starts to run. "Oh! Dunno, but we'll see soon enough, deli~!"
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himori In reply to Umbrella-girl1995 [2011-07-23 05:27:54 +0000 UTC]
Momoko: "Okay! Let's get to work!" She runs with her to the dryer areas where people are buried.
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