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Published: 2007-08-17 17:05:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 374; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description Lying awake in bed
Heart is beating fast
This foundation built so brittle could it ever last?
Tell me darling tell me true is this what it seems?
Or am I being led astray like a lamb to the clutches of the wolf?
Not controlling what I’m thinking
Thoughts are racing
Soul escaping
Tears are flowing
Still not knowing
Heart is beating fast       
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Comments: 12

iolar-abu [2007-08-19 16:37:09 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Yup. Definitively like it.

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hinapeach In reply to iolar-abu [2007-08-20 16:49:43 +0000 UTC]

yayz thankyou!

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iolar-abu In reply to hinapeach [2007-08-20 17:09:01 +0000 UTC]

no problemo!!

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hinapeach In reply to iolar-abu [2007-08-21 00:58:31 +0000 UTC]

grin*

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andshesmiles [2007-08-18 21:09:18 +0000 UTC]

Me like. Me like the way your comment says not at the disco. Me see your sister today. XD WOAH!!! Okay. But yeah. I like the poem!

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hinapeach In reply to andshesmiles [2007-08-20 16:56:31 +0000 UTC]

haha wow thanks so much im going to see her later this week probly ... she wants to have us (me and my bro) over befor school starts were gonna spend a couple days there cuz abe and her r out of work

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kin-the-crazy [2007-08-18 20:58:42 +0000 UTC]

O.O...wow...

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hinapeach In reply to kin-the-crazy [2007-08-20 16:58:13 +0000 UTC]

is that good? i just thought it up while in bed...

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kin-the-crazy In reply to hinapeach [2007-08-21 00:49:49 +0000 UTC]

it's awsome!

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tenebreeze [2007-08-18 16:48:56 +0000 UTC]

I like the 'lamb to the clutches of a wolf' part. Nice simile.

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hinapeach In reply to tenebreeze [2007-08-20 16:53:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you friend!

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tenebreeze In reply to hinapeach [2007-08-20 18:56:25 +0000 UTC]

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