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modlife85 [2022-07-02 03:24:09 +0000 UTC]
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crayle2 [2018-12-15 19:26:44 +0000 UTC]
You are a VERY talented writer with a VERY wicked imagination!
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Thn1mNYrPants [2018-04-01 05:38:53 +0000 UTC]
hey any chance that we could get an image of her in the cell? or about to fall in the cell?
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kobeles1 [2017-01-01 23:14:49 +0000 UTC]
this was a totally fun story.
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Thn1mNYrPants In reply to kobeles1 [2018-03-22 00:46:58 +0000 UTC]
agreed. I thought for sure that a criminal was gonna be a part of the story and “play” Emma’s game with her. But nope. Surprising to see that she did all this to herself. (sorry for any potential spoilers...)
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Thn1mNYrPants In reply to Thn1mNYrPants [2018-03-23 05:34:05 +0000 UTC]
thou i wonder if she’ll ever play that game ever again...?
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MyPictureEverywhere [2016-08-17 15:27:42 +0000 UTC]
The writing of this story is simply exquisite, marvellous work darling.
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Mega2169 [2016-08-05 00:00:48 +0000 UTC]
And there is the risk of playing games in a police station.
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TheDarktor [2016-07-30 21:20:56 +0000 UTC]
This is good stuff!
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SuperFiction112 [2016-07-19 11:00:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh I love the story!!! I think you should continue it and show what humiliating things happen when the officers find her!!! Just saying you are a great writer and how you connected part of it to the real life game you play is awesome! I'm begging you to do an encore to this story even though it is pretty old!!!
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TheModestYing [2015-08-18 03:59:56 +0000 UTC]
I stumbled upon this and all I can say is that among the stories I've read, this is probably the most hilarious!
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lordofcreed [2014-10-22 22:54:17 +0000 UTC]
I just have to know... where does one get those lockable pressure plate inflatable diapers.
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tamaking [2014-04-04 00:20:06 +0000 UTC]
could you please make a second version of this?
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ObliqueAngel [2014-03-25 02:40:51 +0000 UTC]
I don't often favourite stories, but this one was so good, so well written, I just couldn't avoid it.
Great job.
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3hellhound [2014-03-11 23:41:10 +0000 UTC]
you should make a pic of him at the end also great story
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SarahMiles23 [2013-12-01 22:54:40 +0000 UTC]
Loved it
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Indypotter1 [2013-07-16 00:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Please bro, make a sequel.
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shanegeo [2013-06-09 21:56:13 +0000 UTC]
really great story your use of words was very well crafted and thought out and i loved the story all together
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shanegeo In reply to HinaYui [2013-11-07 19:44:19 +0000 UTC]
no problem i loved that story
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ICEKNIGHTBLADER [2013-05-29 20:44:50 +0000 UTC]
U should make a sequel of this
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ThelVadum [2013-04-28 07:26:17 +0000 UTC]
instant hit, Hina... would it be too much to beg for a sequel?
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Rhys1010 [2013-04-27 21:28:14 +0000 UTC]
What a game to lose at.
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Rhys1010 In reply to HinaYui [2013-04-29 00:12:46 +0000 UTC]
I wonder if they'll get a group to play it.
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Sleepy-Sophie [2013-04-27 14:11:50 +0000 UTC]
Very nice story
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LanDPA [2013-04-27 08:11:56 +0000 UTC]
This was a delightful little read. I bet she will get enough embarrassment to last her for a good long time. Nice work.
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Pseudowitch [2013-04-27 05:58:41 +0000 UTC]
Very funny! I loved it!
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aaronjohn1 [2013-04-27 03:14:04 +0000 UTC]
WOW i love it. Is there going to be a PART 2?
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