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hippified-goth — Fatal Cycle

Published: 2004-10-24 15:08:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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Description The blade;
  subtle in its temptation, gleaming in the delicate sunlight.
I try to resist, but as the sun beam fades, so with it does the light within me.
I grasp the handle,
hold it close to my chest, point to my heart.
Time around me stops…. I’m all alone, only I exist
I wait……
   Taking in all around me.
then I take in a last breath before….


before driving the knife through my hardened heart with relentless vigour.
Finally I’m free, finally I'm released, finally I feel myself escape from the cage
I look back at the lifeless shell I’ve left behind
And as time restarts no-one notices the limp body laying in the gutter.
The sun, again, pierces through the darkened clouds;
reflecting off the fallen blade.
Then I see the next desperate soul collapse to their knees,
taking the blade into their clutches.
I watch helplessly as I see him contemplate what he is about to do.
Time slows.
Stops!
then the deep breath, I look away as I know what comes next.
The fatal cycle is repeated, completed!
But soon it shall be started again.
And so, as it once was so shall it be again, the pain of the,

Fatal Cycle!
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Comments: 7

Dark-Priestess [2004-11-15 13:25:27 +0000 UTC]

this is great.hey just out of curiosity, did you take that pic?

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hippified-goth In reply to Dark-Priestess [2004-11-15 16:12:53 +0000 UTC]

nah, a bit of a cheat really, i found it on google

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Dark-Priestess In reply to hippified-goth [2004-11-16 09:41:45 +0000 UTC]

ah that might explain it coz i think it actually belongs to another deviant, i'm sure i've seen it before, great piece tho.

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hippified-goth In reply to Dark-Priestess [2004-11-17 13:39:30 +0000 UTC]

yeah Gods-gorgeous-goth, i kinda lost the password for that account and i've changed e-mail addys so many times since then that i cant remeber which one it would be ing, lol. but hey I'm the same person.

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Dark-Priestess In reply to hippified-goth [2004-11-17 13:43:48 +0000 UTC]

Aaaah lol i spose i won't tell you off for it then i think i devwatched that account.

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hippified-goth In reply to Dark-Priestess [2004-11-17 14:01:29 +0000 UTC]

ummm yeah u did just went and had a look at the page, damned passwords, i should really keep them all the same.

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Dark-Priestess In reply to hippified-goth [2004-11-17 14:02:53 +0000 UTC]

that is prolly helpful yeah.

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