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Published: 2010-10-31 22:55:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 1382; Favourites: 40; Downloads: 28
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uhmm... I dont know what to say.. its Ran again XDDI want to submit it with background but I am very lazy to make one...
to , I am sorry not making background and this is so simlple drawing.. but please C&C.. hahahahaha
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Alrighty then, it's been a while since you haven't shown us anything yet, but now with this latest piece, I shall do my best to find what needs to be improved or praise certain parts.
First off is the posture/pose, you did really good there, the proportions are quite good even though her left elbow (right) looks shorter. Another thing I like is the hand, although the only small thing I think that those hands need is to be slightly bigger. And a good tip to help you find an appropriate size is to cover your eyes.
-Place your palms ends right on the end of the chin
-Make sure your hands are straight up while your eyes are covered.
That's how big their hands usually should be, though mind you the sizes may vary based on your preference.
I do enjoy your coloring and shading, more importantly on the folding. Hair shading and highlighting are very good too, my favorite is how you handle her eyes, I love it quite much. ^w^
Of course, as you mentioned, you didn't include a background. But hey, a background is not necessarily to make a picture look better.
The last thing which maybe you should work on is polishing. When I look at this deviation in full view, I already noticed several spots which were not filled in and some blotches on the outside. The lineart needs to look more smoother than jagged, otherwise it would make the whole image looked rushed. SAI I believe is a great program when it comes to line-art, if this is made in SAI, then a good little fixing and coloring is what you need. It can make a big difference for what a person is looking at.
I will say she's prettier than ever in a simple project, and perhaps she'll look even prettier with some extra care. Nonetheless, great job overall. ^^d
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ahahaha waaaahhh.. I am sory for disappear for a while, I busy with my work, and just can drawing on saturday >.<
hahaha oke the first is hand, u are right, her hand is too small T.T the thruth is I find it out after I finishing coloring, but I lazy to fix it up XD
next is left elbow... waaaahhh I really didnt notice it before... thank u very much, if u don tell me, I wont find it out >.<
and about background.. ahahah since its busy, I cant make BG, actually if I draw with BG its always need 4-7 days >.<
I draw outline with SAI but coloring in Photosop.. hehhehehe eeh?? still not filled..?? waaah... I didnt see it too.. thank u for telling me broo XD
and last thank u very much, becoz of u, my skill n knowledge improve again XD
its very nice to have u as friend bro XD I owe u XD
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Heh heh! Don't you worry friend, in time you'll overcome those problems and you'll be a better artist. That's what I do. ^^
Oh and there's nothing you owe me, I'm doing this because I care to help others. ^,^
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hehehehheee yeaaahh.. I hope u will be a good artist too... lets we try our best together, if u need my help, plis dont mind to ask XD
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waaaaah thank u very muuuchh XDD
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waaaahhh thank u very muucchhh yuko-chaaaan XD
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woooowww thanks for the funny icon, izaarkkk XD
hhahahahaa (klo "iz" diganti "sh" manteb tuh) XD
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iz ganti sh ... shark ?
...
OMG !! baru nyadar itu artinya hiu !!
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uwaaaahhh OMG.. ampun bang... janji saya gak nakal lagiiiii... hahahaha
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kakak...ini...
*nangis terharu biru*
BAGOOS!
ajarin saya, ajarin saya!
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ahahahha waaah mukanya biru?? kedinginan??
omg *siram iki pake air panas*
hahahaha thank you very much iki... eh?? ajarin.. boleehXD
tapi bingung gw gmana ngajarinnya -.-''
lagipula basic ente udah keren gan, udah manteb XD
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bukan kdinginan..ketimpuk ama anak jack mania!!*???*
*abis disiram jadi udang--oren2 mateng*
kak yuki make tablet pen? ama SAI? uda cicip manga studio blom?
ajarin nge-path!
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hahahaha waaaah pasti sakit tuh kena timpuk.. kecuali klo pake duit...hahahahaa
yuupz, pake pen tablet, Sai buat outline, n potosop coloringnya..
hahaha manga studioo?? tauuuu... gw suka bnget tuh ama yg itu XD
eeh?? ngepath?? si zakuro noh jago.. hahhahaa
sbnernya sih gambar gw ini ga pake ngepath sih...
klo ngepath tu enakan pake illustrator n SAI menurut gw sih XD
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klo pake receh ya sakit jg lah -,- kalo pake uang kertas 1 gepok 100rban saya rela!
saya g punya tablet ama SAI..*gelinding k WC*
naaaaaaaah saya baruuu aja kmaren beli yg bajakan~~(khekhekhe) terus sama skali ga ngerti makeny, ga bisa disimpen pake format JPG ya?
oo senbei pernah crita yg namany zakuro tp saya blom kenal sama skali ==;
saya ga bisa nge-path yg melengkung..slalu melenceng! jadi kaku! uda kyk kaktus deh =A=
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hahhahahhaa ga pake tablet juga ga masalah kok, sbnernya yah ga terlalu beda sih.. antara make tablet n mouse
eeh?? format JPEG?? bisa kok...pilih "export as" aj
hahahah klo mau ngepath melengkung di sotosop tuh.. yah pilih pen tool....
click aj di titik awal n titik akhir.. trus clik tengah2nya.. pas yg tengah digeser, jadi melengkung deh...
bingung yah?? susah sih jelasin secara onlen, hehehehhee..
klo ke ginko, tanya aj ama fudo atau zaku.. mereka ahlinya tuh XD
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masalahny..ehem ehem..saya pake laptop, jd g ad tikusny...
OOOH! nanti saia cobaaaaa!! 
bener..saya ampe cengo bacsny! maklum lemot~
waduu saia ga kenal >.< cuma tau dr ancha senbei saia mah..ntar dsangka SKSD
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hahahahhahaaa ngewarnain pake manga studio EX 4.0 sih bisa.. cuman enakan sotosop ah..
hahahahhaaha
waaah gapapa SKSD, yg penting dapet ilmu.. hahahaha si ancha kyknya lagi sibuk kerja juga yah...
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bisa ga d manga studio buka gambar yg belom diwarnain? haduu saya buta bngt nih sama manga studio!
huahahahaaa
ga lah, no enak klo gt!
eh sibuk opo dia? ga pernah liat kabarny lg di koran *???*
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buka gambar file apa?? Jpeg??
bisa kok.. tinggal drag n drop aja.. hahahaha
di manga studionya u cari aj tutorial pdfnya....
gw juga blajarnya dari situ kok kbanyakan....
eeh?? emang dia sering muncul dikoran??
koran ttg apa?? korban gempa??
hahahahahaa dia sibuk di lumine studio kyknyaa
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iya >.< bisa minta tolong step by stepnya ga kak? bah -,- nyari tutorialny aja bingung
lho????
katanya dia mau buat band "GINKOBAND" KAN? *dilempar duit 100rb* *bank band?*
wuah studio apa tuch? smoga karirny bersinar seperti sunlight!
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eeehh step by step??
hehehee gw ga pernah bikin tutorial step by step >.<
hmm.. mungkin step2nya gini
-bikin sketh dulu sampe bner2 oke
-tracing pakai pen tool di photoshop klo ga punya tablet (jgn lupa bedain layernya
-layer warna sama layer outline dipisah yah, yg layer outline diatas
-di coloring dah.. trus kasih shading yg menurut u manteb
saran gw sih, contek aja dulu gambar2 orang yg lu suka, jadi plagiator aj duluu.. (tapi bukan buat kriminal lhoo)
keuntungan jadi plagiator tuh, skill lo nambahnya cepet
bank band????????
kok gw ga pernah denger O_O
hahahha
dia di lumine studio cuuuyyy....
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waaaah thanks again, froznkamui, btw congratulation for your premium membership XDD
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I know her, she is MAMA FATE~!!!
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eeh?? mama fate???
hahahaha is that really looks like her??
actually my drawing style is like masuda shizuka from final approach XDD
since she is very cute XD
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just kidding
but it's resemble her
final approach? gimme sauce
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eeeh?? u don know final approach?? really??
hahahahahahaaa
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i don't have knowledge bout that kind of games
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not in game, but in anime movies XD
hahahhahha
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okay, it's time to release my google-fu skills!
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hahahahahhaaa jurus nanya om google.. haahhahaa
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ehehehhe thank u very much XD
I try my best...
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