6Hisano9 [2011-11-17 04:20:22 +0000 UTC]
Cute! I like the sketchiness of it!
As for feedback for improvement... hmm... make sure that you're outlining the entire body and all it's shapes and whatnot before drawing the clothes, this will make the entire thing look nicer. Don't be afraid to draw hands, just do it. They might not look good at first, but keep practicing. Finally, don't just use darker colors of the base color for shading. Think about the fabrics and how the light hits things.
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