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Hitomi2009 — A Twist of Fate
Published: 2008-08-21 00:30:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 176; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description A Twist of Fate

He asked her to go to the woods for a bit of fun
she feared for her life
when he brought his gun
so she made sure to bring her knife
and ruin his fun
As the fear seeped into her brain
Her mind grew foggy
It became hard to see into his little game
and they sat down but he seemed a but funny
not in a comical way
something much more sinister was at work
But she couldn't say
And in the darkness her fate seemed to lurk

But in a twist of fate itself
Her life wasn't taken by beast nor man
It was nothing she could have seen herself
This wasn't something anyone could plan

Her heart was racing in fear
As the world fell down around her
she could see the end was near
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Comments: 3

kiwi-damnation [2008-08-24 08:05:36 +0000 UTC]

That is intriguing. Amazing in fact. Instant fave

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Hitomi2009 In reply to kiwi-damnation [2008-08-24 15:01:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much this means a lot to me coming from an amazing poet like yourself.

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kiwi-damnation In reply to Hitomi2009 [2008-08-25 02:28:43 +0000 UTC]

*blushes* Thanks You're very welcome

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