Comments: 42
Scartalon-of-Thunder [2016-06-29 19:03:32 +0000 UTC]
Are you gonna continue this? It's really good!!!!!
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mlgundeadgamer [2016-05-07 12:31:00 +0000 UTC]
I was gonna say this is the best thing ive seen so far but STOP! i've only been a deviant 1 day and i have already found the best guy for writing interesting gory fanficion, so a round of applause 4 u! *random clapping*
btw I'm SO HYPED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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DonnaDora28 [2015-11-27 16:17:10 +0000 UTC]
Moreee!!! Plz
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DuskFlare1 [2015-10-18 04:08:45 +0000 UTC]
more plz?
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creepersrfun [2014-07-08 15:36:52 +0000 UTC]
Please continue this!!!!
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Decori-Australi [2013-10-14 11:38:15 +0000 UTC]
This is the best fanfic I have ever read. >3<
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ScoutBelle [2012-05-30 21:57:12 +0000 UTC]
I didn't read the first chapter but I LOVE this! *favourite*
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runtyiscute1999 [2012-04-14 01:21:01 +0000 UTC]
O-O I love this soooo frekin much
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runtyiscute1999 [2012-04-14 01:20:55 +0000 UTC]
O-O I love this soooo frekin much
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dippy2 [2011-11-04 14:07:19 +0000 UTC]
RARG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH PLEASE UPDATE!
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Hiyume-chan In reply to DingDongFootball [2011-05-04 05:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes I am~ I've actually been 'ALIVE' for a while but haven't been able to write due to having a Block and school. I'll be more active starting probably this weekend C:
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syncthetempestrules [2011-03-06 01:27:09 +0000 UTC]
Oops, I thought I commented on this, I guess I didn't -.-
Anyway, this by far, is my favorite Team Fortress 2 Fanfic ever!!!
I can't wait for the next chapter x3
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Hiyume-chan In reply to aulauly7 [2011-02-28 05:22:55 +0000 UTC]
... MY FACE RIGHT NOW.
You have no idea how much it means to me that you like this so far. I love your comics and your art and just HJFBJKHSBFJKFBKJHFBKJF.
Okay I'll stop being all giddy >>;
Thank you <3 And there will be more. I just have a lot of fanfics to write so it might be a while~
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DingDongFootball [2011-02-19 06:33:53 +0000 UTC]
I really hope you plan to continue this. It reads so well, and I can really see your Scouts as intriguing characters and making for an entertaining fic...
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Hiyume-chan In reply to DingDongFootball [2011-02-19 15:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I definitely am continuing. Chapter 3 is in the works at the moment. It's just that I'm working on a request right now, and then I have 3 other fanfics that need writing. I'm fighting between which ones should be priority xD'
Anyway, thank you very much for reading, and I'm glad you enjoy it so far~
Also sdfkjgbnskfgskjhrg I love your writing so the fact that you like this really means a lot to me
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DingDongFootball In reply to Hiyume-chan [2011-02-19 15:52:21 +0000 UTC]
you love my writing?! As I was reading this I was totally like "this kicks my ass" and went to go do some writing exercises to compensate
Good. You BETTER be finishing this. I'll beat you up otherwise.
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Hiyume-chan In reply to DingDongFootball [2011-02-19 18:18:24 +0000 UTC]
Holyshi- I'm not that great, IMO. I read your stuff and I'm just like "FFF MY VOCABULARY/DESCRIPTION IS TERRIBLE." But the fact that you think it's that good is seriously an ego booster. Excuse me while I go hyperventilate with joy.
Oh, I will, don't worry. It'll be a while, though. I procrastinate like you don't even know. Don't hurt me ;A;
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DingDongFootball In reply to Hiyume-chan [2011-02-19 23:16:47 +0000 UTC]
How about we just cut to the chase and suck each other's non existent penises? I think it would appropriately describe our feelings about each other and their writing skillz Because otherwise I will have to eat you in order to consume them!
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Hiyume-chan In reply to The-Lost-Spirit [2011-01-14 12:26:36 +0000 UTC]
I will! I'm working on a few things right now, though, so do bear with me :C
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zabuza13cola [2011-01-13 02:47:49 +0000 UTC]
Well, it could be worse. He could be naked.
That could be arranged, my dear Nate, that could be arraaaaanged.
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Hiyume-chan In reply to zabuza13cola [2011-01-13 03:45:24 +0000 UTC]
PFFFFT. OH U.
I don't think I ever told you why I put that line in this...
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Hiyume-chan In reply to zabuza13cola [2011-01-16 15:32:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh, well, during B lunch, I was telling Jordan about this fic, because he knows about it and he was wondering what I was writing, so I told him that Nate was captured and all the details and stuff. And... he started giggling. So I asked him why.
And he said he pictured Nate with nothing on except his hat over his dick.
So then I stared laughing, and THAT LINE came to mind, and like an idiot I told Jordan. So for the next like 3 days he kept bugging me to put it in the fic. And I did.
sbjhfskhfgkjrgf bnjbfr
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666em-chan666 [2011-01-11 02:14:39 +0000 UTC]
8 paragraphs from bottom (including single lines as paragraphs) "But as he sat there he noticed things he hadn't given a single A THOUGHT" the second "a". please don't get mad at me for correcting here you weren't on MSN >.<
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Hiyume-chan In reply to 666em-chan666 [2011-01-11 03:17:19 +0000 UTC]
You could have just... told me tomorrow. And you know. Thanks for mentioning whether you liked it or not. *sarcasmsarasmsarcasm*
And hey, it's only one typo. That'a record for me! I usually have like 5 xDDDD
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Hiyume-chan In reply to 666em-chan666 [2011-01-12 02:54:57 +0000 UTC]
... Did you just call me HUN? HUN!? You make me sound like a child and yet I'm older than you xDDD And thank you C:
PFFFT YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO. *shot*
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Hiyume-chan In reply to ThatLethalSoul [2011-01-10 22:26:46 +0000 UTC]
That was the desired reaction, so I'm glad you enjoyed C: Thank you~~~
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ThatLethalSoul In reply to Hiyume-chan [2011-01-11 02:15:58 +0000 UTC]
No problemo! I can't wait to see what happens in chapter 3!
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