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Published: 2012-10-08 20:43:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 4173; Favourites: 132; Downloads: 19
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Flitting heartbeat, sparrow high,
twisting round the mountain's eye,
tracing breath of shattered skies
and filling velvet palms.
Falling sparrow, cry of stone,
wings of mist and powder bone
sipping, slipping from thy throne
within their crimson throng.
Treading now, beneath the clouds
As what was once so heaven bound
now falling, falling, to the ground
And singing silent songs.
Fly no more, above the arcs
singing side thy fellow Larks
curl beneath their shadows dark
and sing your silent songs.
Your flitting heartbeat, Sparrow high,
now sings of silent songs.
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Lovely poem! 
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much dear!!
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wow. this is absolutely impressive! you really have outdone yourself this time!
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Thank you so much!! your comments always make my day!
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This is so amazing! I absolutely love your way of writing c: It seems so effortless
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Thank you!! I'm glad you took the time to read it OvO
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This reminds me of the story of the guy who only had one wing, so someone made him another out of wax. Then the guy was able to fly, only he got too close to the sun and the wax wing melted. Sorry, I can't think of any names or what the story was called...This was a beautiful poem, I enjoyed it so much ^^
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Ooh, That's Icarus and Daedalus~!! I love that story <3 Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it!!
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Haha, thank you very much!!
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i feel so sorry for the birdie D':
nice poem though
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I know, the picture made me quite sad, so in a way it really fit the poem.
Thank you for reading!!
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i hope it died quick and painless D:
and you're welcome!β₯
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Well thank you for reading!!
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Thank you very much!! I appreciate it~
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I adore this poem!
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Well thank you for taking the time to read~!!
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Beautiful piece! It flowed gorgeously! What an amazing job!
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Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it~!
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You are very welcome. 
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So cool, I've a project that would fit in that concept
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Neat! What project it, may I ask? (:
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ItΒ΄s a underground music project about portuguese poetry and experimental music you can find it in :
www.myspace.com/lettersontheroad and on youtube by the links:
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Hope you like it!!
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Ooh, thanks!! I'll be sure to check it out (:
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you're right, i don't believe i can interpret every bit as you do.
but i love it.
i love the line:
"As what was once so heaven bound
now falling, falling, to the ground
And singing silent songs."
it's so sad and true.
the pic. is so sad. [and a bit creepy] i thank it fits well with the poem.
[I donβt mean the creepy part]. more of a sad everything-must-come-to-an-end sort of sad.
i also love the fixed form. i haven't read that in a while.
all the poems i've read are mostly free verse.
you give fixed form a good name.β₯
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Ah, it means so much coming from you and I really love hearing your thoughts!! Thank you~!
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Your work is like a flashback to the poetry I thought had died on us. O: LOVELY.
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Thank you so much!! I know, it seems that there's always going to be less and less formal poetry and more modern 'lets write about how much we hate life' poetry =/ It can be a little discouraging at times 
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Ah yes--your poetry is a like a breath of fresh air!
It seems poets are straying from the original, which although isn't always bad, can be a little disheartening.
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It does seem to linger that way, huh? Well thank you again!!
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No problem. ^^
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Woah! Lovely! Usually rhyme scheme feels forced, but I didn't even notice it until I was halfway through the poem!
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Thank you very much!! I'm glad you liked it~!
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