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HoldTheNoise — Pianist

Published: 2012-07-29 18:46:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 4926; Favourites: 243; Downloads: 41
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His fingertips splashed through the ivory keys
With ripples that scattered in rows
While windows bloomed petals of watery pinks
Each kissing his cheeks with a glow

Releasing his notes like a bird caged in spring
He untangled the keys from their din
Making sense of a sequence not meant to be seen
He etches them deep in his skin.

He performs for the windows and plays for the halls
The curtains will sway in his song
The picture frames quiver and jump from the walls
Beneath the great rush of his palms.

So I open my window, before I lay rest
Just to capture a trace of his spawn
It's been years since I've heard it, but still I await
for the chime of the Pianist's song.
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Comments: 94

Taelsa [2018-02-24 19:31:07 +0000 UTC]

ummm, I have no words. I can't fully express my admiration and awe of your skill!
wow..... 

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nickie101 [2014-07-01 04:06:25 +0000 UTC]

love this!!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to nickie101 [2014-07-13 04:27:04 +0000 UTC]

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NeonKazma [2014-04-05 03:42:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I must say, the poetry is beautiful. Already read it twice today. Got any more like these?

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HoldTheNoise In reply to NeonKazma [2014-05-16 18:31:39 +0000 UTC]

so sorry about the late reply. i just recently moved countries. I think that most of my poems here run along the same lines if you want to check any of them out (:

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Chezzy-Am [2013-12-03 13:01:53 +0000 UTC]

I find myself in disbelief that I didn't write a comment on this after all this time... Wow...


Its a beautiful poem that you've written. And one which was worth looking at honestly.


I'm in awe. I honestly am. Well written.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to Chezzy-Am [2013-12-19 13:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. Thank you so, so much! Your words are far too kind

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Chezzy-Am In reply to HoldTheNoise [2013-12-19 13:38:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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l9remipsum [2013-06-20 05:23:15 +0000 UTC]

That was so beautiful! I don't know you, but I would like you to know I love this so much!!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to l9remipsum [2013-06-28 02:53:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! That really means a lot C:

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l9remipsum In reply to HoldTheNoise [2013-07-10 19:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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CrepuscularPetrichor [2013-06-01 14:31:19 +0000 UTC]

... And now I must go write a song inspired by this

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HoldTheNoise In reply to CrepuscularPetrichor [2013-06-04 21:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh Yes please do!!

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SweetHinageshi [2013-01-23 18:36:04 +0000 UTC]

"His fingertips splashed through the ivory keys"
I love your text...
I love your writings

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HoldTheNoise In reply to SweetHinageshi [2013-01-23 21:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much~!! (:

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maslenitsa [2012-09-01 16:42:30 +0000 UTC]

This is great.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to maslenitsa [2012-09-02 03:50:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~!!

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MagicClare [2012-08-21 23:26:29 +0000 UTC]

It would be that much nicer if tenses didn't conflict.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to MagicClare [2012-08-22 02:48:34 +0000 UTC]

T-the tenses conflict for a reason.

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RockyPrice [2012-08-21 18:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Great imagery and tone.
Thank you for an amazing read.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to RockyPrice [2012-08-21 18:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Well thank YOU for reading!!

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Czetchy-Ebilmancer [2012-08-21 15:40:49 +0000 UTC]

Spectacular!
If only watery pinks would kiss my cheeks when I piano. *sighs*

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HoldTheNoise In reply to Czetchy-Ebilmancer [2012-08-21 18:45:14 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well you never know. Maybe they do!!

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Jade-Pandora [2012-08-21 06:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DLD for August 21, 2012 for this piece!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to Jade-Pandora [2012-08-21 18:45:36 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, well thank you for reading!!

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xlntwtch [2012-08-21 06:26:07 +0000 UTC]

=Sammur-amat said it. This poem "reverberates." on the DLD!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to xlntwtch [2012-08-21 13:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you so much!! It's highly appreciated!!

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xlntwtch In reply to HoldTheNoise [2012-08-21 14:14:09 +0000 UTC]

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Sammur-amat [2012-08-21 05:07:29 +0000 UTC]

I love how your words seem to reverberate. Congratulations on the well deserved DLD!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to Sammur-amat [2012-08-21 13:11:43 +0000 UTC]

Ah, well thank you for reading!! It was quite a nice surprise to wake up to this morning! Haha

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Sammur-amat In reply to HoldTheNoise [2012-08-21 13:16:06 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure entirely
I'm so glad to have helped put a smile on your face!

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DailyLitDeviations [2012-08-21 04:21:52 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-08-21 13:10:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh!!! Thank you so so so much!! It's an honor <3

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The-Funkiest-Penguin [2012-08-15 18:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Just... Wow.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to The-Funkiest-Penguin [2012-08-15 19:55:10 +0000 UTC]

hahah

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ArtsyTiger [2012-08-08 19:36:16 +0000 UTC]

I think it deserves a favourite...

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HoldTheNoise In reply to ArtsyTiger [2012-08-08 20:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well thank you~!! I appreciate it

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ArtsyTiger In reply to HoldTheNoise [2012-08-09 16:12:02 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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CelestialMemories [2012-08-02 11:51:44 +0000 UTC]

Stunning! It really resonated with me. It's amazing...

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HoldTheNoise In reply to CelestialMemories [2012-08-02 14:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~~!!! I'm glad you enjoyed it~

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CelestialMemories In reply to HoldTheNoise [2012-08-02 16:10:49 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Scarlet-Lark [2012-07-31 01:08:19 +0000 UTC]

It is this piece that is making me watch you. As a pianist myself, I found comfort in the lines that you've written, and that last line...great job.

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HoldTheNoise In reply to Scarlet-Lark [2012-07-31 01:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much~!! I'm always so jealous of people who can play the piano... Being a drummer, a don't understand all those chords and scales very well~ But thank you for the watch!!

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Scarlet-Lark In reply to HoldTheNoise [2012-07-31 01:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Aha, see, I can't play drums at all. I've always been in awe of those who can move their appendages in different ways all at once without being completely lost. And no problem, it was well deserved!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to Scarlet-Lark [2012-07-31 01:30:56 +0000 UTC]

...Hehe~!

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CERose [2012-07-30 22:09:50 +0000 UTC]

You are scary talented!

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HoldTheNoise In reply to CERose [2012-07-31 00:17:28 +0000 UTC]

Umm...thank you~? * u* Haha!

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jossprods [2012-07-30 11:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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HoldTheNoise In reply to jossprods [2012-07-30 13:17:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you thank you~~!

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Gemdrop [2012-07-30 11:13:01 +0000 UTC]

Oh that's beautiful, love it. Your use of words is just amazing.

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