TF-Lilac [2018-09-04 14:46:02 +0000 UTC]
Okay, first things first: I absolutely love the coloring choices and the linework on this piece. Everything really pops and you worked with yellow lighting way better than I ever could. Even the placements on the shadows on the grass underneath the characters look great. You even drew breasts greater than I ever could. Howdoyoudothismaster???The crow looks pretty damn cute along with its wittle bellll. And the fact that you made the castle less detailed in the background is a nice touch.Your anatomy is very good and better than mine. (I suck at drawing girls) This could just be me, but her arms look a bit skinny compared to the rest of her body.The eyes are also too high up her face and her forehead is rather small. This is also something I struggle with; (like, a lot. It's a pain, I know) but even if you're drawing in an anime style, the eyes shouldn't be too high and away from the nose. I highly recommend this tutorial: www.youtube.com/watch?v=A7bzhG… I also think she should probably be looking at her pet crow as it's looking right up at her. Considering how there's yellow lighting on the characters, I think there should be some yellow lighting on the grass, as well.Overall, you have a very beautiful style. Just needs some work and I think you'll be an amazing artist.
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HoneyedSpleen In reply to TF-Lilac [2018-09-04 15:49:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for taking the time to type out this detailed comment. I truly appreciate your feedback.You have some great points here, I will take lighting and anatomy into more consideration. Thank you for the tutorial link as well.
TF-Lilac In reply to HoneyedSpleen [2018-09-04 16:13:15 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. That tutorial was made by a very talented artist who can help you with nearly anything!
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