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Description
The older version: hooeysmarts333.deviantart.com/…

Decided to remake it because I wanted to see how much the character designs and how I would create comics as a whole changed. Consider this as a more cleaner version.

Plot of the comic: Bob and Melissa were sitting, laughing when Bob's stomach begins to growl, making him realise that he was hungry, so Melissa finds an apple that fell beside her, and she gives him the apple(after cleaning it, of course!)

Changes:
Character designs
Panels are better organized
I actually put in an explanation as of why Melissa has an apple.
Hooray for some background!!

Cons:
Yeah, the positions feel awkward, but just a nitpick of mine.
the blanket could have been detailed a lot more
I should really put better detail on the background.

Will upload the PNG version later, but for now, here you guys go.

Description
The older version: hooeysmarts333.deviantart.com/…

Decided to remake it because I wanted to see how much the character designs and how I would create comics as a whole changed. Consider this as a more cleaner version.

Plot of the comic: Bob and Melissa were sitting, laughing when Bob's stomach begins to growl, making him realise that he was hungry, so Melissa finds an apple that fell beside her, and she gives him the apple(after cleaning it, of course!)

Changes:
Character designs
Panels are better organized
I actually put in an explanation as of why Melissa has an apple.
Hooray for some background!!

Cons:
Yeah, the positions feel awkward, but just a nitpick of mine.
the blanket could have been detailed a lot more
I should really put better detail on the background.

Will upload the PNG version later, but for now, here you guys go.