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BlackRoseOpal [2010-07-07 02:35:50 +0000 UTC]
Heeeelloooo gorgeous! Lov it
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Ilovevampires4 [2009-12-30 05:44:27 +0000 UTC]
0w0 Pretty! What is the songs name? I know its called Gabriel but who is the Artist?
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Ilovevampires4 In reply to horror-x [2010-01-01 03:10:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Say could you read this? it's apart of my story I'm typing once you've done that tell me if I am worthy of writing a book.
βDemron!β I could hear the silent cries of my beautiful blue eyed mortal Ashie. The deep bronze bell chimed to only echo around this town. The fight was about to start. I stopped to hear the tears of my dear Ashie hitting the cold stone path behind me. I closed my eyes and smiled weakly as it was too painful to watch her cry. The villagers, steps were pounding a few miles behind us. I wasnβt scared to die, for that I had once faced death himself. I sighed and thought βwhat other choice do I have?β But before anything else happens here, let me share my story with you, the story of my love for Ashie.
I was born in the 1500βs as child labor was even so there. This place we were forced to work at, made many of us sick or if for the worse die. Misery was all childrenβs feelings as they worked, as they cried, and as they died. It was disgraceful the way they treated us. But a man of the unknown put this to a stop; he shut the place down too. As I know him, he was my Master. Master Vincent was the way I was to address him by, for that I was no more then a mere servant. He was a kind and pure hearted man. He was the kind of person whoβd put violence to an end. But I knew behind those merry eyes of kindness laid a dark secret. My beloved Master Vincent was a Vampire.
I was very loyal to Master Vincent; I never hesitated on his orders. βIf it was something to be done, then it must be complete.β Was my motto while list I lived in the grand mansion of my Masterβs. It was truly sad that he had to be something so astonishingly dark. Being a creature of the night must be painful as you could never die with the time of your family did. Nor see the sunlight ever again. I would never ask him how long he had been Vampire.
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Annasanvk [2009-10-25 09:39:19 +0000 UTC]
Great job. I agree, i would like more Zeki to
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winxaqua [2009-09-28 20:03:29 +0000 UTC]
this is lovely~
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horror-x In reply to winxaqua [2009-09-28 20:50:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
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winxaqua In reply to horror-x [2009-09-28 20:57:52 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome -^_^-
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happyzuko [2009-09-25 00:38:37 +0000 UTC]
awww this is sooo pretty! love his wings!
the chapter was kinda anti-climatic ... at least she touched his sleeeeeve
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PK-PSDOL [2009-09-24 20:39:50 +0000 UTC]
wow this is very nice i love it . yea i agree lol but i thought mybe how yuuki thought too do zero had too do the same so no one will suspect he loves yuuki thats why i think he run away i think is mask of coldness was falling and seeing her i bet his emtions where going too take over the same her , she when she got the glove that was her hidden emtion that she was holding when she so him , remember vampire and sara plus kaito where looking at them so you can iamgin ho they felt.still well done
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PK-PSDOL In reply to horror-x [2009-09-25 08:39:56 +0000 UTC]
yea its on of the epic zeki moemnts lol
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x-camisado [2009-09-24 20:38:48 +0000 UTC]
oh wowie,
this is beautiful!
I love the emotion,
even though it makes me depressed.
gahh this chapter was such a dissapointment,
and we have to wait so long till the next one ><
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