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HorseygirlE — Shaddy on the AF Ledge
Published: 2017-07-31 00:51:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 175; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Five in the morning, and Shaddy can't sleep because of an impending invasion. So he wanders outside the fortress and finds this patch of grass randomly growing out of the rocks, which bolsters his spirits because, hey, if grass can grow here, the Allies can do anything!Such an optimist.
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Wow! Thanks, no one's called my art inspiring before
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I like the tone and atmosphere of the piece! It really adds a nice touch. You did a nice job with details. The valley below looks pretty good in a dark grey. I feel like the black spots are trees. Whatever they are, they add a very spacious look to the piece. I like the mountains in the background, too. They give the painting a cool feel to it, but I feel like you should work a little bit more on the bottom of the white, snowy parts. It looks like they pop out in front of the darker grey of the mountains. A way to change this is to just blur it a little, since objects in the distance usually tend to be less clear. You don't actually HAVE to do this, as it depends on style, but if you were going for a more realistic piece, then you should. Next, I like the shading and blending of everything. I love the smooth look of the mountains, and Shaddy's jacket. Speaking of Shaddy, I like how you made his image a little sharper than everything else to give him more clarity. It gives that photographic look to the piece. Now, with the stars, I personally think you should tone down the amount of large stars and irregularly shaped ones, just a bit. In real life, most of the stars you see in the night sky are much smaller. With the moon, I like the glow around it, but there should be less glow around the darker side, and the edge of that side should be blurred just a bit. Other than that, the rest of the piece is amazing! I hope this helped. ^^
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Thanks! This is a great critique.
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