Kyoushiro15 [2011-04-25 21:27:00 +0000 UTC]
Your proportions are a little bit off, and though it looks fairly good aside from that, the emotion on the face is extremely stiff. To help correct that, you should try drawing from life a bit more. Get a few friends to pose for you, or get a mirror and become your own model. Once you've got the basics down, try to loosen your lines up a bit. It will give your subject a more natural look, and give you a bit of a better base to work off of before tightening up on your linework.
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