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RaizaNoelia [2017-02-01 00:33:12 +0000 UTC]

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Really love this piece overall! The color scheme is very strong! The yellow in the background makes the character pop, although if the focus is on the character I'd consider lowering the saturation of the background. Right now my eyes keep going back to the background. The pattern in the background is very nice and works great with the characters solid color clothing. I did notice that her skin has areas that appear rigid. This can be eliminated if the transition of value from light to shadows is more fluid and softer. Not sure if that makes sense but things tend to look rigid if the values of colors are too spread out. So if you were to darken her skin or lighten the shadows, it won't appear like the muscles are sticking out. The same goes with her hair. It's really beautiful but if you'd like her hair to appear softer just soften the transition of dark to light. Something else that is really small is keeping an eye out for tangents. Tangents tend to make drawings look flat. For example where her thumb meets the edge of her hair is a tangent, along with her pointer finger meeting the edge of the curl by her cheek. Another one I noticed is her elbow meeting the edge of the skirt. Nudging things over just a tad will make a difference.    I really like how fun her expression is and how unique her hairstyle is. Makes this piece pop out as original.   

I think another small thing I noticed was the alignment of her features on the face. Her eyes and nose seem to be on a different line than her mouth. If you were to draw a line down the line of her nose, you may notice that her mouth and her eyes looks a bit off centered. Her head looks like it's tilted to the side, so just making sure her features line up with the angle of her head will make this piece a lot stronger. Beautiful job overall and I hope this comment helped!  

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MarzipanDoodles [2017-01-30 02:32:15 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE her color scheme and eyes. Those are the two things that stand out to me first. The detail on her eyelashes is unique and really pretty, I love it, and the texture on her hair is fantastic. Hair is something I used to have a lot of trouble with so I always admire when people shape it nicely

I think to animate her face a little more what you can do is give her smiling cheeks. By that I mean, when someone smiles, their cheeks get rounded at the top on or just under the eyes, and depending on your preference you could add that detail or give her the little pouches under the eyes like how your eyes crinkle when you smile. I hope I’m making sense. Aside from that, while I love that her mouth makes a little heart, the angle of the teeth makes her look like her mouth is pointing downish while her nose and eyes are pointing straight ahead, which makes her face look very rounded. What you can do to fix that is get the center teeth straight across and maybe round the sides off a little bit, to reduce the curve. The last thing I’d suggest is small, just to add a shade to her nails so they aren’t the same shade as her skin. It gives her more of a realistic look.

I really hope this helped! Overall I love the image, it’s gorgeous. I really think my suggestions will make it pop a little more, but if nothing changes it’s still a beautiful piece

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DemigodseaMeg16 [2017-01-23 02:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Awww

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NeutralSand [2017-01-01 15:47:36 +0000 UTC]

Te l'ho già detto, ma ci tengo a ribadire quanto l'hai fatta segzi *luna perv*
Poi oh, quei capelli sono IL SENSO DELLA VITA    

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Rad-Puppeteer [2016-12-30 23:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Digging the coloring and the background here!!

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Beetlejulia [2016-12-30 11:54:38 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh bro eve
È stupenda! La adoro tanto nel tuo stile *3*
E quella posa è così Mlmlmlmlmlmlmmlmlmlmlmlmlmlmlmlm XD

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DragonBellum92-DP [2016-12-27 18:42:21 +0000 UTC]

Questo gemsona (ovvero fluorite) è fantastico, sia la tendenza di colori (verde o verde acqua/violetto) e la posa.

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Gmatty [2016-12-27 15:49:41 +0000 UTC]

    Love it!

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Sarapolpet [2016-12-27 08:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Oddioooo é MERAVIGLIOSO *0* l'idea é fantastica, sta benissimo con la personalità del personaggio!!! Sei riuscito a rendere benissimo la posa, poi è tutto così ben fatto *o* le pieghe dell'abito, i capelli e la colorazione sono magnifici *~* un lavoro fantastico, spero che tu vinca ;v;

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SG-Karuta [2016-12-27 03:40:45 +0000 UTC]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWW!!! SHE LOOKS ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE IN YOUR STYLE!!!! I love all the bright colours and contrasts!! (Especially in the background!)
Her pose looks spectacular and the shading and effects on her are spectacular!! The soft tones and highlights on the fabric is sooo beautiful and they look realistic its soooooo amazing!!!
I really love how you draw her lips and the shines there are really cool!!! (ALSO AHHH THE MOUTH LOOKS SOOOO GOOD!!
Lastly, WOOOOOWW THE HAIR IS SOOOO INCREDIBLE!!!I ADORE THE SHAPES YOU'VE DONE THERE AND THE SHADING AND HIGHLIGHTS SPARKLE AWESOMELY!!!!
Absolutely brilliant interpretation of her!!! GOOD LUCK IN COMPETITION!!!!

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Lealbatross [2016-12-26 22:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Wao figata *^*
Adoro la sua posa 8'D

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GonchiArts [2016-12-26 22:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful lady

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soda-and-skateboards [2016-12-26 22:19:00 +0000 UTC]

Ahh ma è bellissima ;v; è ufficiale,adoro il tuo stile <3

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