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LackeDragon [2017-10-20 01:52:28 +0000 UTC]

Since you ask for review, I will give you some critics

The TF itself is not bad. It lacks some feeling of movement for the muzzle and ears which seems just there instead of transforming (pushing forward, moving to the top of head etc).
The skin in the middle makes a weird round that catches the eyes. Which is weird because, it catches the eyes where nothing actually happened yet
Anatomy of the face isn't perfect but it's not bad either.

The thing that really pulls the pictures down is the huge amount of orange and the claustrophobic feeling it has, especially on the bottom side.
I think it would have been better to continue the headshot to the shoulders, or cut it and, at contrario, to give some air to the top of the pic to let the image flow with the rise of the flames to gave them more importance at the same time.
It also looks like the flamme are in the background but isn't on the character (link between face and orange is just a line instead of flames)

There you go

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