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DragonicSoul [2008-03-05 16:37:31 +0000 UTC]
Awww... H'es so cute! I love the folds in his shirt, and his face looks excellent!
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oni-kura [2008-02-23 20:12:26 +0000 UTC]
Nice. I really like the color scheme. It really helps tie together the whole image. I love the expression too. It's very fitting. Really nice work.
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HuiHua In reply to oni-kura [2008-02-23 21:21:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I was worried it was getting too blue. TT
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The-Mad-Poet [2008-02-23 05:20:21 +0000 UTC]
Nice work on the shirt, but what really strikes me is the slightly wide look of his eyes; with his hands up and those words on the page one really gets the impression that he's trying to close something out. Just another little voice for Ryou, I guess. There's great feeling to this piece; subtle, but large.
Nice stuff. Looking forward to your next planned pieces.
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HuiHua In reply to The-Mad-Poet [2008-02-23 06:39:00 +0000 UTC]
Hey! Long time no see! Thanks for commenting!
Hmn, after some retrospect, I actually uneasy about something about his eyes. I find something quite stark about it - ... I think his eyes stand out too much. I like his hands though. But I think in the future I might have to edit his eyes. They look somewhat - buggered and intense. It looks ok from up close, but from afar - perhaps the brown is too harsh...
But I'm glad you like it. ^^ I'll see if I can eventually get the hang of semi realism somehow.
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HuiHua In reply to The-Mad-Poet [2008-02-23 21:20:29 +0000 UTC]
lol borgs. XD
Hmn? The starkness works for you? If they don't catch any one else off gaurd, then maybe I'll leave them. Can't decide anything right now though - you know how you must come back to a piece to edit it because otherrwise you woudln't forget what bothered you in the first place? XD At any rate, I trust your judgement, so I won't edit anything until some time vastly in the future.
Realism is so much fun to do - especially when you finally 'get it'. But I find realism so much harder when you're not just copying something, but you're also altering it to fit another image. But it's such a good skill to learn eventually.
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XxAkefiaxX [2008-02-21 20:24:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is really good.
Just wondering, but are the words from a song?
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HuiHua In reply to XxAkefiaxX [2008-02-22 12:11:44 +0000 UTC]
Nope...just made-up. ^^
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XxAkefiaxX In reply to HuiHua [2008-02-22 14:47:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh, ok. Just wondering. Nice picture anyway. ^^
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yaoilover22 [2008-02-20 01:07:42 +0000 UTC]
that is a very nice picture of Ryou.
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-02-19 19:24:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
Uh - which writings?
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AnRa--doexma In reply to HuiHua [2008-02-19 19:40:34 +0000 UTC]
Fanfictions? Like Ore no Gakuen?
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-02-19 19:59:37 +0000 UTC]
Lol - I have so many different writings I have the tendancy to forget which one someone might be referring to -...especially since all of them haven't been updated in a while...XD;
Uh - Ore no Gakuen is ..doing alright. i've been working on the next chapter, but I"m at a bit of a debate because I don't know which scene to put in the next chatper - ie, if it should be BakuraxMalik centered or RyouxMarik centered. Plus, I've been badly in need of a beta-reader just to give me some basic feedback. concrit is always best. my beta-reader hasn't been on the computer in months.
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AnRa--doexma In reply to HuiHua [2008-02-20 07:04:21 +0000 UTC]
Well... maybe I could give you some assistance at least until your real beta comes back? I might not be the best writer and English isn't even my first language but I've been told I give pretty good feedback...
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-02-21 02:55:01 +0000 UTC]
Oooh, could you? It would probably help immensely, that is, if you don't mind. lol, English isn't my first language either- but your ficcs are wonderful! The English makes perfect sense! And I'm more interested in feedback than grammar or Englisdh anyways - and you always give me such helpful reviews.
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-02-22 12:12:42 +0000 UTC]
^^ Thanks. I'll compile what I got (since I have scenes written, but not a complete chapter) and send it to you.
Btw, I'm liking your new BakuraxRyou fic.
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-04-03 05:45:00 +0000 UTC]
OMG!! I'm so sorry! Did i ever send you any of my stuff for Ore no Gakuen?!?!?!?!?!?
T______T If I haven't, please remind me!! I haven't been on the computer in forever and I've been swamped with exams and work!! T_T Sorry sorry sorry!
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AnRa--doexma In reply to HuiHua [2008-04-03 06:19:11 +0000 UTC]
You haven't sent me anything...
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-04-04 05:51:21 +0000 UTC]
I sent it from a gmail account rather than my yahoo one. So sorry for getting this so late to you. Thanks so much for your time and help though. I greatly appreciate it.
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-04-03 20:28:06 +0000 UTC]
T_T_T_T_T_T__T_T_T__T I'm really really sorry T_T I'll send you what I have today.
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-03-02 01:53:46 +0000 UTC]
Ack!! Sorry I haven't been replying to you - I ketp on thinking I sent you something but maybe on devart.
Would you mind sending me a note of your e-mail? I can't seem to find it anywhere, even on your profile. T_T Thanks!
Loved the latest chapter of Hello? by the way.
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HuiHua In reply to AnRa--doexma [2008-02-29 07:02:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh hey - sorry I haven't sent anything yet; I think I've lost your email address. ><:; Would you mind sending me a deviantart note or a fanfiction PM of it? Thanks so much!!
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Kotobi [2008-02-19 19:08:51 +0000 UTC]
really nice work x3
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HuiHua In reply to Kotobi [2008-02-19 19:11:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks - that was a fast reply!
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