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Published: 2009-12-10 00:57:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description Quirky Doctor Life

Life is a research
And I am the scientist
Testing theories.
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julietcaesar [2009-12-10 06:57:32 +0000 UTC]

I like the idea behind this haiku. Doctors may earn a lot of money for their trade, but it's hard to get into university to learn medicine, and anyway, being a doctor had never really interested me for some reason.

Interesting how you made it out to be 5-7-5. You stretched out a few words in there to make them fit with the syllable count, after I re-read it to try and fit it into the syllable count.

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HumbleNewb In reply to julietcaesar [2009-12-10 12:12:26 +0000 UTC]

I may edit this and switch "theories" with "variables."

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julietcaesar In reply to HumbleNewb [2009-12-11 04:25:42 +0000 UTC]

It's up to you, I guess, but theories sounds good in a way, because of the alliteration with "testing".

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