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HunterJRC — The Outsider # 5 : Look at me!!!
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Published: 2018-05-15 01:50:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 936; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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In the middle of the sound of the half sleep streets and the echoes of feelings that a night with a silent moon can give to a poor soul with no memories a soft female voice sounded from behind.She: Stop right here oldie. Did you forgot about us and all we have to do? If you wanted a vacation it was better to ask us to cover you,you know?
Jowry turn to see her, but a little pain was in his heart for some moment but at the same time suspicious to see a teenager at that hours and calling him.He ignored the pain that he was feeling for a moment he only answered.
Jowry: I dont know what are you talking about. Maybe you are confusing me. By the way, that are not hours for young people like you to be outside. Go back to your parents please.
She get choked because the reaction was one unexpected and tried to talk to him again.
She: Wait what! Come one! Stop with the jokes, you never has been good with them. We have to go home!
Jowry: Girl, please stop. I dont know your intentions but i dont have time for that. I have to much in my poor erased mind to play that weird game. Go home before i call the authorities girl.
He turned away and continue to walk but the feelings in him was more hard than before. But at the same time it was like the pain inside him was a normal thing in his life so he dint pay attention and walked away. She in chock started to cry, without believing what she was seeing. But with all the tears and pain she wont give up and with a last strengths for the battle inside with that chocking feelings she said with her voice broken.
She: I don't know why you can't remember me but please! Don't go . . . . Look at me!!!! At least one more time . . . . .look at me . . . look to my eyes . . .
(In the past i was planing to do a Journal explaining that but because i recently found that way more easy to do that i opted to update the story of that poster to tell the whole story behind it. I hope you guys like it and sorry for the late of telling that part of the story)
Previous part: The outsider 1: Waking up (Jowry's point of view)
Next part: Evah's resemblance
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Comments: 32
wow .. this is actually making me tear up a little, nice work buddy, I am also about to be done with my progress on this scene so be in check of it >_> but still this gave touching experience to me, I see stuff like this on a lot of movies and stuff and boy ... does it hit me hard ... grate work you doing
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I am glad their feelings reach you. Their story if you start follow it you will find various parts like that. After all like a phrase say,sometimes is needed to know sadness to know well the happiness ^_^
And i will wait gladly to see your work. I am sure is going to be awesome friend ^_^
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thank yooouuu UuU I love your trust in my comic and yes please keep your adventure up !
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You welcome as always friend ^_^ and you can be sure that i will keep with Jowry and familly story to the end ^_^
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hope I am a lovable family friend of your squid family 0w0
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also is this female character in a relationship with a combat fighter like her ?
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Hehe, i wont tell 
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Because i cant spoil to much the story @_@
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Ty man! Is a grateful surprise have your comment 
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Dude... i am in a lost of word's. i cant even tell you how great you are.
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Thank you man for your words. But i am far from being like that hehe. I still have to much to learn ^_^
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Hmm. Cool. Your posing and composition are pretty good. The expressions not only on the character's faces, but also conveyed in the body posing. It tells you exactly what they are thinking while also making them seem alive almost. Like it was a frame from an animation. There are a few quirks here and there but actually pretty good. The right side is a little barren though, but no matter!
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Thank you
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I'm still pretty new myself but you have a lot of potential dude!
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I was looking yours and you are doing a very good ones too! So in other words i can say the same, you have a lot of potential man
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Thanks I go for a more crime/drama kind of thing. Glad you like it though
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Waw, this one is very particular, and probably the best you did! Evah's expression is so pure, and Jowry's ignorance about him puts me out of the ring, it's just perfect!
- Oz : "Waw, I do not know how I will react if one of my dearest beings were to forget me ..."
- Jacktil : "You would melt in tears too, I know you well !"
- Oz : "I will not stand it, indeed..."
- Zourkay : "I would shake him until he remembered me !"
- Oz : "Gently ! it's about Jowry, don't say things like that about him..."
Keep it up ! Brofist !
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Thanks friend! And look like the abysses friends read well her toughs . And i can say again the best is yet to come ^_^
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Hehe, as always, I will be there to see it
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This here is the perfect example of Evahs "Behind all her angry face something more pure than gold can be find." thing. Even she has feelings, even if she doesnt look like she has.
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Ah, looks like you've added some dialogue
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Yep, because my original plan was not good for it. So i better stick with the way i am doing it now ^_^
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They are going to need it
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