Comments: 19
JonnSnow [2012-02-20 07:26:04 +0000 UTC]
Well, I liked it well enough to color it [link] . Oops. I thought I got this from Color-me-club, but I see now that it's not. As far as critique, it's an excellent line art, very clean, easy to color, and the wind swept lines are beautiful. I only made two adjustments: the seams on the front of the bodice are not symmetrical, and should be, unless she has a really really bad tailor, so I moved both seams slightly so they run from and to the same spot on left and right sides. The second change is I moved the nostrils up slightly, to make room for a fuller upper lip, to go with the full lower lip. The hands might be a bit too large, given that the elbows are behind or even with the torso, so only the forearms stick out in front for foreshortening, but the petals blowing out of her hands quickly lead the eye away from her hands, so I'm not sure anyone who isn't coloring this would notice. Anyway, I ask permission to color this (even though I already have) and if you want me to take it down, I will. Sorry about that.
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JonnSnow In reply to HuntingDaphne [2012-02-20 16:57:27 +0000 UTC]
2007! OMG. I'm so embarrassed. I'm new here, and haven't figured out how to tell how long a piece has been posted. OMG! now I'm even more embarrassed! It says when right there in the Details off on the side. I never noticed that before. I learn new things here everyday. (Usually the hard way...)
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Friedenmann [2007-02-25 15:12:45 +0000 UTC]
Nice, so many details, and the dynamics... I wanna see colors^^
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DragonAlloy [2007-02-20 04:43:32 +0000 UTC]
very lovely with the line art. the flower petals look nice. cant want to see how this looks finished
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Alurco [2007-02-16 05:38:13 +0000 UTC]
Ah I like it. You always draw really good. From the old pics that I saw in your Portfolio, you have improved alot in your skillz.
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HoundofCullin [2007-02-14 20:50:33 +0000 UTC]
This is reallyreally well done hon. It looks awesome and is definately in deservance of a place in my favorites.
And now food for thought.
Your composition and everything is stellar, but I think could be enhanced more if you had varying line thickness. I think it would help accentuate the curves and depth-perception of the piece.
I'm not saying it's something that needs be done, merely something you might want to think about a little bit?
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HuntingDaphne In reply to HoundofCullin [2007-02-14 22:18:21 +0000 UTC]
yea when I was messing with it in photoshop the lines didnt all end up thick, Ill probably work more on it and replace this lineart, it wont show it but Ill tell you on yahoo later when I do k ^.^ and thanks for the fav and the great comment <3
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Skellus [2007-02-14 13:44:22 +0000 UTC]
What can I say...
Cute and great picture ^^
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