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HuntingDaphne — Queen of hearts
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Published: 2007-02-14 13:40:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1201; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 65
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This was an extra little V-Day gift thing I did, Ive had ppl call me the queen of hearts before, I like hearts I think theyre cute so alot of my shirts and jewlery have hearts on them. I dont know when I started collecting heart shaped items its like an old hobby, and an old nickname. So here ya go, and btw I hope everyone has a wonderfull valentines day, I love you all <3Please comment, I need some good opinions on this, one thing I know his how thick I made the lower hands and arms, its kinda supposed to be that way, which will be shown more when I color it as its supposed to be closer, I just thought Id clarify that cause I do know how odd my lineart tends to look till I color it, then everyone goes oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh thats why that looks like that ^.^ lol anyways cya guys
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Well, I liked it well enough to color it [link] . Oops. I thought I got this from Color-me-club, but I see now that it's not. As far as critique, it's an excellent line art, very clean, easy to color, and the wind swept lines are beautiful. I only made two adjustments: the seams on the front of the bodice are not symmetrical, and should be, unless she has a really really bad tailor, so I moved both seams slightly so they run from and to the same spot on left and right sides. The second change is I moved the nostrils up slightly, to make room for a fuller upper lip, to go with the full lower lip. The hands might be a bit too large, given that the elbows are behind or even with the torso, so only the forearms stick out in front for foreshortening, but the petals blowing out of her hands quickly lead the eye away from her hands, so I'm not sure anyone who isn't coloring this would notice. Anyway, I ask permission to color this (even though I already have) and if you want me to take it down, I will. Sorry about that.
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lol nah it's fine, if you go to my lineart gallery it says everyone is welcome to color my stuff ^.^ You did a great job, and I appreciate the critique, I haven't looked at this piece in probably a year or two now lol you should deff check out my other pieces if you want more practice, my linearts and such have gotten much better since 2007 lol
Thanks for showing me this I faved it ^.^
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2007! OMG. I'm so embarrassed. I'm new here, and haven't figured out how to tell how long a piece has been posted. OMG! now I'm even more embarrassed! It says when right there in the Details off on the side. I never noticed that before. I learn new things here everyday. (Usually the hard way...)
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Nice, so many details, and the dynamics... I wanna see colors^^
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very lovely with the line art. the flower petals look nice. cant want to see how this looks finished
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I really love how much detail and motion this has. So happy, too.
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Ah I like it. You always draw really good. From the old pics that I saw in your Portfolio, you have improved alot in your skillz.
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This is reallyreally well done hon. It looks awesome and is definately in deservance of a place in my favorites.
And now food for thought.
Your composition and everything is stellar, but I think could be enhanced more if you had varying line thickness. I think it would help accentuate the curves and depth-perception of the piece.
I'm not saying it's something that needs be done, merely something you might want to think about a little bit?
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yea when I was messing with it in photoshop the lines didnt all end up thick, Ill probably work more on it and replace this lineart, it wont show it but Ill tell you on yahoo later when I do k ^.^ and thanks for the fav and the great comment <3
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