Miner557 [2016-12-11 08:09:50 +0000 UTC]

the earth is my boobs 

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Martim32doors [2015-09-25 01:34:46 +0000 UTC]

very good! 

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Lamarridley2 [2013-03-29 23:14:35 +0000 UTC]

I like it

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ellief2p [2010-12-16 17:12:16 +0000 UTC]

hehe " awesome.

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asterisksceptor [2008-11-21 06:58:37 +0000 UTC]

I think the poem is interesting, you make good points.

I don't like the title at all. It's degrading and pretty much forces the reader to assume you feel that way about women in general.

These are my own opinions, however.

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printedlove [2008-05-24 02:19:31 +0000 UTC]

i agree with the comment above...very bitter-sweet aswell. goodjob.

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groovus [2003-10-11 23:51:17 +0000 UTC]

I like this, don't ask me why but I like this. It needs a little tweaking to make it a tad-bit juicier, but I like the descriptions much.

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