morphinetears [2004-03-10 01:52:51 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. I like how you made it dark, but not bloody, gory, unbearable dark. Lovely.
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Rolling14reader [2004-03-06 00:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Damn that was like unfathomable doom right there, staring me in the face. I tried to imagine everything. That's how I understand poems such as yours, just sit back and let it flow, and go through my head as if I'm there. I..could actually imagine myself in this dark room, and somehow each section made it worse, and more gruesome. Your description is definitely wonderful, I must say, and I think I'm going to have nightmares tonight
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