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HyperChronic β Prologue 2
Published: 2012-02-22 03:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 2590; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Finally uploaded! Been done for weeks, but I been lazing off from adding the text, I have to admit.
Bah, I feel like there is lots of mistakes, so feel free to point them all out to me in an orderly fashion. I rather have my complaints lined up in a neat row, rather than a flaming riot. ^^
Anyways, I hope you don't think Conrad's back story isn't TOO harsh, cause.... you know.... ARSON IS A BIG THING.
The Orange Clipboard (C) =HyperChronic
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Nice! (: I really like Megan's design! Love the colors used too
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Though short it seems like a REALLY good plot and you should pursue it
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I must say that your character work is really good. Effective color palette on the both of them, good shading, simple but effective animation. The text and image placement work well, but I feel that the story progress too fast for just a single page. Don't be afraid to take your time and let the readers get to know your characters more. Keep up the good work.
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I love the mixture of cute characters with slightly dark dialogue! Keep it up!
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nice, it sound like a sad story but your style is very cute and this is nicely drawn
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This is really sweet. I love the style and feeling here.
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Oh, it's harsh, but I don't know... I feel like a big fire always helps to create the mood... Like: "How are you? - My house burnt down... - Let's make out."
...Nevermind, just me and my wacky ideas.
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LOL, you are a very funny person you know!
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I just watch a lot of sitcoms, which helped me develop a sense of irony. Actually, I'm terrible with jokes
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Maybe that's why I find you funny. I love irony.
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What kind of sitcoms do you watch?
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Mostly "The Big Bang Theory" and "Two And A Half Men", but I also liked some of the british classics, like "Fawlty Towers". And Monty Python, although sometimes they went overboard for me.
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Wow, you too? I wasn't able to watch it (BBT and T&HM)that much this summer since... having no cable prevented to enjoy such shows. I should check out "Fawlty Towers" and "Monty Python" for myself. But, they went overboard?
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Monty Python was a british comedy group from the seventies that was mainly into absurd humor, which can get me out of my nerves sometimes. I recommend you watch "Life Of Brian", one of their most known movies; or look into some sketches over the internet. Fawlty Towers is somewhat of an offspring, less absurd, more conventional, but still pretty good. It's quite short (only 12 episodes) and also pretty old.
Classics, nonetheless.
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OH, absurd humor... I haven't watched many shows with that.... I think? >_>; Life of Brian huh? I'll see into it before I go back to school next week.
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It's a great movie, trust me.
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tennant huh ?
...wonder where that came from ..ahem
yes arson is a big thing but one of my characters is the god of chaos who kills billions a day because she thinks is funny
there is a bit of a difference there
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If you're thinking about the tenth doctor from Doctor Who... then no... when I made this character, I wasn't thinking of him when I created this character for this project. I then realized it when my father pointed it out. I couldn't change it at the time since it stuck with me.
Yikes. O_O
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and here is said god of chaos [link] im sure she just did something heinous
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cute done, with nice color scheme that point the mood
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Interesting. Your prologues got my attention but I think maybe the background colors might be to intense and in gulfs your characters. Anyway, I'm interested in reading more.
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I'm still learning about hues and values and how to use it properly. I'm sure these pages will look at least adequate in the future.
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"At least adequate"? Ouch! Ya' don't need to say it like that. Judging from the rest of your gallery, your use of color, hues and values, are perfect. When it comes to color, I'm not the best person to ask. When I see color the lights and dark's sometime seem to much in certain places or blend to easily.
All in all, your work is very exceptional.
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Such a sweet idea, and an adorable style as well!
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Aww man, bit sad but cute. The thing about the housefires reminds me a bit of Lemony Snicket's Series of Unfortunate Events in a sense.
Also the way you handled the shading and lighting adds greatly to the scene. Well done.
I'm looking forward for next pages, hahum---
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This is so amazing ;-; My comics fall short to this!!!
I love the gradients of the yes and hair... the fire effect... the... everything...
I have told you several times of how great your art is, But I just ADORE the color handle you did here... 
And by the way, the only thing IΒ΄d point out is that the flames in ConradΒ΄s house extend for a bit too long, but the rest is just gorgeus to me. Man, I wish I could do stuff like this... but I am such a lazy bastard. I could never make this. 
Anyway, point is, I love it. Yes, actually, even enough for it to be a Favorite...
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Really? It isn't too... dark, is it?
I'll try.
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Pff, it's your comic, if you like it how it is, why care what other people think?
But for the record no it didn't seem like it to me :3
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It's just a little project that I'm going to stop with a huge cliff hanger. It's just practice with the other comic I'm doing. I kinda do feel it's too dark, since it's out of my character.
Oh good!
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Welp, I'mma stay tuned. Seems interesting! :3
Well, it's your comic, do what you want with it ; u;
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