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Published: 2011-07-10 20:21:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 6450; Favourites: 244; Downloads: 71
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Description I'm not a poet
My English fails
Please read it humbly
...
Lets save the whales



Please don't get offended, my english isn't the best and making rhymes maybe wasn't the best idea :"D

I made this in attempt to cheer myself and hopefully other people who read it maybe just a bit :"D

Who are you?
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Comments: 68

dardasonet In reply to ??? [2014-06-06 22:49:03 +0000 UTC]

i mean, you are pretty awesome, miss.

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CodaBear48 [2012-09-03 01:03:05 +0000 UTC]

I am happy
Now, it's true,
Reading this
That's made by you

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hyunit In reply to CodaBear48 [2012-09-05 10:29:48 +0000 UTC]

I feel happy, i feel glad,
that this idiot made you spaz.
Thank you for reading, thank you for that,
sorry for my rambling, sorry i'm mad.

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FurubaCanine [2012-07-17 03:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! this is so good
it make me feel better :')

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hyunit In reply to FurubaCanine [2012-07-20 13:54:47 +0000 UTC]

glad it did

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Scriddles [2012-07-10 06:58:08 +0000 UTC]

You've been featured~! [link]

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hyunit In reply to Scriddles [2012-07-10 09:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much ˆˆ

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Scriddles [2012-07-08 20:16:39 +0000 UTC]

This is GREAT.

*INSTANT FAVE*

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hyunit In reply to Scriddles [2012-07-09 00:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks xD

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evanlai [2012-02-16 18:13:19 +0000 UTC]

This is nice I like the aura it brings

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hyunit In reply to evanlai [2012-02-17 09:44:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you ˆˆ

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evanlai In reply to hyunit [2012-02-18 18:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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ForeignButterfly [2012-01-23 07:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Would it be ok if I make something like this?

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hyunit In reply to ForeignButterfly [2012-01-23 09:35:04 +0000 UTC]

sure thing, maybe just link back if you'd like to ^^

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ForeignButterfly In reply to hyunit [2012-01-23 18:41:00 +0000 UTC]

I will :3

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Enpitsutan [2011-12-02 15:08:01 +0000 UTC]

What a great idea~

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1incubus [2011-10-31 19:30:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha, cute! ^.^

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RoseChristopher [2011-10-10 22:03:20 +0000 UTC]

it was really nice

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hyunit In reply to RoseChristopher [2011-10-18 21:49:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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CherryCartoons [2011-10-10 06:51:20 +0000 UTC]

This is really really cool! I could see this being the slogan for some big company or something!

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hyunit In reply to CherryCartoons [2011-10-18 21:49:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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CherryCartoons In reply to hyunit [2011-10-18 21:52:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!!!! 8D

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ChocoUsa [2011-10-02 04:26:36 +0000 UTC]

This is really good, and like i dont know anything about rhymes im not talking about...
the whole point is what makes it great...after reading it it make me think about what would it say if it was me xD...it wouldnt rhyme at all btw haha

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hyunit In reply to ChocoUsa [2011-10-18 21:50:25 +0000 UTC]

thank you aha xD

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Q-x [2011-09-04 10:53:29 +0000 UTC]

Very coo!~

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hyunit In reply to Q-x [2011-10-18 21:51:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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CandyCoatedLSD [2011-08-19 04:08:32 +0000 UTC]

I love this. <3

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hyunit In reply to CandyCoatedLSD [2011-10-18 21:53:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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CandyCoatedLSD In reply to hyunit [2011-10-19 02:18:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! <3

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PeaceIsntSilent [2011-07-28 01:43:48 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing...
I makes me wonder who I am...
Or who anyone is...
IT'S BEAUTIFUL!!!

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rawr-smile13 [2011-07-17 04:18:20 +0000 UTC]

this is amazing!!!

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hyunit In reply to rawr-smile13 [2011-08-01 19:27:22 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks xD

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rawr-smile13 In reply to hyunit [2011-08-14 13:47:34 +0000 UTC]

np!

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gyun-meushi [2011-07-14 21:56:22 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!!

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hyunit In reply to gyun-meushi [2011-08-01 19:17:08 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much

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manganime108 [2011-07-13 18:19:30 +0000 UTC]

Who am I?
I am YOU O__O , just kidding
im some random person commenting on this

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lawblz2000 [2011-07-13 17:13:55 +0000 UTC]

'i got no boobs' lolol it's so funny, i like this post!

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vtas [2011-07-13 12:54:04 +0000 UTC]

I like it a lot <3

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Nidhogg00000 [2011-07-12 21:49:42 +0000 UTC]

Very cute ^^

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HoudaShams [2011-07-12 15:20:22 +0000 UTC]

lol aww...very cute

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pohcbSonic [2011-07-12 14:44:52 +0000 UTC]

Artistic.

reminds me of something..

"WHO AM I????" by jackie chan.

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hyunit In reply to pohcbSonic [2011-08-01 19:11:32 +0000 UTC]

i love that movie xD

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pohcbSonic In reply to hyunit [2011-08-02 04:45:05 +0000 UTC]

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iLoveYoun [2011-07-11 16:44:45 +0000 UTC]

Just Great.

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DidixChanx [2011-07-11 11:06:21 +0000 UTC]

This is great !

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LeakingInk [2011-07-11 08:09:16 +0000 UTC]

haha, how cute C:
i'm raquel. o u o

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chuckCYANIDE [2011-07-11 06:44:16 +0000 UTC]

I am me, I am free, I am utter misery.
I like your poem, I wrote my own, because I'm living on my own.
It cheered me, just to see, this poem- it's funny.
I am Meg, it's 4pm, and this is who I am.

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myth8pirate [2011-07-11 06:18:42 +0000 UTC]

It was very nice - and I loved the humor, the bit about "cooler than the pope" was hilarious
I also giggled at your "Lets save the whales" rhyme X)

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zeldastopfan34 [2011-07-11 05:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is better then most at my school!

This is very good

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Diamondheart96 [2011-07-11 04:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Your English is a lot better than some of my peers.
I love the concepts in your poem here, about flipping back and forth about your identity, and who you really are. That was deep.

I'm on a horse.
(That cracked me up! XD)

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