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i-lie — A Love Poem
Published: 2009-11-20 22:10:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 572; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 4
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                  ♥

       If I were a soldier

   & you were the enemy

     It would be like now.

  One of us would have to

     Kill the other and

       We'd both cry.

  But only one of us would

     Have to live with it

       While the other

          Would die.
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Comments: 28

SkeletalSmith [2010-09-22 21:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Describes perfectly the pain you feel when you love someone, but you are no good for each other, and one of you has to decide to pull the trigger.

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i-lie In reply to SkeletalSmith [2010-09-24 21:25:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad I captured it so well for you.

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toxic-scheherazade [2010-09-21 19:39:07 +0000 UTC]

The centering works fine and the ending's perfect... I love this

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i-lie In reply to toxic-scheherazade [2010-09-21 23:34:00 +0000 UTC]

-^^- Thank you, I'm pleased you love it so!

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underworldriver [2010-09-21 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

very true and emotive

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i-lie In reply to underworldriver [2010-09-21 23:34:16 +0000 UTC]

Great! glad you think so ^ ^

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qiuyingquan [2010-07-15 12:52:31 +0000 UTC]

The ending is really good! It's very expressive.

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i-lie In reply to qiuyingquan [2010-07-19 23:00:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you think so, & thank you for the comment! I like favourites, but it's nice to knwo what people think and like/dislike about it!

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qiuyingquan In reply to i-lie [2010-07-20 15:31:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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RighttotheCore [2010-07-14 12:27:47 +0000 UTC]

i don't just like this, i love it. <3

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i-lie In reply to RighttotheCore [2010-07-19 23:00:44 +0000 UTC]




I'm really glad

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MemoriesAbandoned [2010-07-09 06:55:46 +0000 UTC]

I love you. I this poem. You are a wonderful person.

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i-lie In reply to MemoriesAbandoned [2010-07-11 00:28:40 +0000 UTC]

!!

I'm so happy I could make you feel that way!!

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MemoriesAbandoned In reply to i-lie [2010-07-12 01:50:33 +0000 UTC]

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quietgoddess [2010-05-11 06:15:24 +0000 UTC]

I like it. It's cute.

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i-lie In reply to quietgoddess [2010-05-12 13:53:17 +0000 UTC]

(= Thank you, I'm glad.

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TheTerrorOfTheDeep [2010-04-28 04:24:48 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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DrawingIsMyDrug [2010-04-27 15:34:44 +0000 UTC]

It's so heartfelt and pretty ;w;

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Akki-Darkness [2010-04-27 02:34:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is so intense and sad~

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i-lie In reply to Akki-Darkness [2010-04-27 03:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Zipti3 [2010-04-27 02:31:36 +0000 UTC]

I love it, it has a great grasp on life if that make's sense XD

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i-lie In reply to Zipti3 [2010-04-27 03:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha thank you! ^^ I'm glad to hear that

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Zipti3 In reply to i-lie [2010-04-27 03:38:10 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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drakmordis [2010-02-16 01:39:18 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Just grabs the heartstrings and pulls.

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i-lie In reply to drakmordis [2010-02-18 06:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! -^^-

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jtmr7 [2009-12-03 19:23:03 +0000 UTC]

I like this

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i-lie In reply to jtmr7 [2009-12-03 20:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you (:

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jtmr7 In reply to i-lie [2009-12-04 04:06:52 +0000 UTC]

your welcome!

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