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Published: 2009-02-21 01:10:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 595; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 1
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Description Tears streaming down his face, the cloaked figure ran through Hyrule town. He turned a corner into a dark alley and hid in the shadows until several guards ran past. He leaned against the wall and slid down to the ground, thinking of why all this had happened.

I thought they were OK with me…I thought they had forgiven me…How could they have lied to me like that?! Master Ezlo sent me to “spend some time with people my age” since I’m always at studying at home. Of course, Master thought that I would be allowed to stay; that someone there might actually want to be my friend…But everyone still remembers what I did.

I suppose I can’t blame them for hating me, but I…Even someone like me needs friends, right? I didn’t expect them to welcome me into their arms, but I didn’t think they’d chase me away either…

Wind started blowing fast and toppled a few market stands over. Eventually, it all began to surround the lone figure in a sort of cyclone, moving forcefully in his fury. After moving several items left around the town, it lessened, shifting from anger and rage to regret and hopelessness.

No one likes me…I have no purpose, I can never do anything useful…The only thing that I could do to make everyone happy would be to die…I…deserve to die, don’t I? After all I’ve done; all the destruction I’ve caused…

The breeze calmed and the air ceased movement. Only around the sorcerer did it move sorrowfully. Then, the sorcerer called upon the wind, his only friend, to help him one last time. A sharp gust of air came around the figure and directed its blast at his neck, acting as a blade, and ending his depressing existence. The air silenced and became lifeless, never to move again.
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Comments: 18

wallavan000 [2015-01-17 12:23:24 +0000 UTC]

Nooooooo! Translation: Nice work. I like.

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twili-child [2010-11-03 23:11:49 +0000 UTC]

*sobs silently next to Vaati's dead body*

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i-luv-vaati In reply to twili-child [2010-11-11 23:05:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww... ;-;
but thanks for the comment ^_^

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twili-child In reply to i-luv-vaati [2010-11-11 23:12:53 +0000 UTC]

No don't even say it

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ILoveLinkSQEAL [2010-04-20 00:43:14 +0000 UTC]

good, but... YOU. KILLED. MY. VAATI. NOW YOU MUST DIE AS WELL! you know, that fishy is ruining my evil-threatening-ness. *kills fishy* YOU'RE NEXT! JK, but it was sad. i would have been Vaati's friend!

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Umbreon115 [2009-04-15 00:25:25 +0000 UTC]

poor guy, I know what its like.

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Mirria1 In reply to Umbreon115 [2010-01-14 02:45:24 +0000 UTC]

so do I.

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i-luv-vaati In reply to Umbreon115 [2009-04-23 23:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Same. And thanks for the fave and comment!

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Algandars [2009-02-22 01:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Yay! You finally fixed it!

So sad, though. Poor Vaati. I would have been his friend.

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i-luv-vaati In reply to Algandars [2009-02-23 21:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I would've too, but he just felt so depressed and stuff. At the time, it was too overwhelming for him to feel so emo...

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Algandars In reply to i-luv-vaati [2009-02-23 21:55:21 +0000 UTC]

Awww...D:>

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SnowPetalMagus [2009-02-21 20:54:00 +0000 UTC]

That's so sad ;_;

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i-luv-vaati In reply to SnowPetalMagus [2009-02-23 21:41:46 +0000 UTC]

I was kinda surprised as I was writing how sad it turned out 'cuz usually I just try to make happy things.

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Astralstonekeeper [2009-02-21 01:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh... you need to get rid of all the junk HTML. dA does all the formatting for you, so you need to take that out.

plus, you seem to have around 5 lines between paragraphs. I dunno if that's what you wanted, but remember that the contest ends today. I'll put the contest end journal up either late today or early tomorrow.

Oh hey, did you get that email I sent you with all the info for our fanfiction?

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i-luv-vaati In reply to Astralstonekeeper [2009-02-21 01:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah, yes I did. I got it a few days ago, but I don't check my email every day...

And I dunno how to change the way it looks. There was none of the weird space things in the saved file, so I dunno what happened.

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Astralstonekeeper In reply to i-luv-vaati [2009-02-21 01:26:40 +0000 UTC]

You got it, did you read it? (I want an opinion on the stuff in it)

saved file-? EH??? When you're submitting literature, you go to the "upload text" for the deviation place. Then you enter the straight text.

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i-luv-vaati In reply to Astralstonekeeper [2009-02-21 02:36:00 +0000 UTC]

I'll send you comments about the rp through my e-mail. I dun wanna spoil it for other peoples.

And it's all better now! I put the story in the "upload text" place and it worked! (lol, I didn't see your message 'til now)

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Astralstonekeeper In reply to i-luv-vaati [2009-02-21 03:25:11 +0000 UTC]

Okay! I look forward to your email! ^^ If you have suggestions or whatnot, I'm excited to hear them.

XD well, that's good, at least!

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