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Published: 2008-07-30 00:42:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 322; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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If I work any more on this picture I'm going to pull a serious Nny.I'm keeping this in my gallery for a little while and then I'm going to throw it into scraps... and when the time comes when I don't want to scream thinking about working on this picture, I'll come back to it and fix it... maybe even start over from scratch.
But until then, critic please. Tell me what you think I can make better until that day comes. <333
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its proportioned well, but the color...hmmm. Why are her knees pink?
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Yeah, the face is awesome, and I like the way the hair so casually falls against her face, plus extra points for green-eyed red-heads 
only critique I can think of is the coloring of the beach and skintone, they seem a little too drab and similar, otherwise I thinks its a great piece.
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Ah, thanks for pointing out a problem I was totally refused to deal with. I was in denial about it for a while but now that it's mentioned it's about time I dealt with the beach and skin being almost the exact same colour. 8|
AND YES. REDHEADS NEED MORE LOVE. <3
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I love the look on her face. Hardcore.
And umm-- critique, right? (you know, an ACTUAL one instead of FFF AWESOME?)
Her right, our left... the hand looks a bit weird? Almost like it's backwards because the lack of a thumb.
And maybe the head looks a bit long, like... with the way she's tilted it shouldn't be that large?
(maybe I'm just nitpicking)
because really, it looks -awesome- otherwise
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Hmm, I'll keep that in mind when I work on it again. 83
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