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ackeibler [2010-08-14 17:03:30 +0000 UTC]
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I'd like to start by saying I do enjoy this photo, and think it makes for a nice scenery or landscape shot. You've done a very good job of capturing a "still" moment, and the linear evenness of the ocean and the shore further compliment the stillness of the image.
However, I do have a few suggestions.
First is the color of the photo. You've faded your blacks into a red hue, and although the technique is good, I think the red hue gives the photo a lower quality feel than what you've intended. The red looks good in the sand, but doesn't really jive well with the umbrellas. Maybe shifting them over to blue might help accent the shifts a bit better?
Also, I might suggestion working on your grain a bit more. This goes back again to that "lower quality" feel. (And by quality, I mean the quality of the resolution. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/> ) I think the concept of grain is a nice touch, but I might suggest adding a bit MORE grain, to shift the image over from a low-res feel to a more antique or faded feel.
Overall, I think you have a photo with a lot of potential. Keep up the great work!
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Blunnt [2010-08-14 15:16:07 +0000 UTC]
So simple...So beautiful^^
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xXEndOfTheRainbowXx In reply to i-msolastsummer [2010-07-29 15:03:54 +0000 UTC]
Probabil.Desi in unele momente parca as prefera izolarea din iarna haosului care apare acolo de 1 mai.
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i-msolastsummer In reply to xXEndOfTheRainbowXx [2010-07-29 18:43:14 +0000 UTC]
De ceva timp, acolo este un haos permanent in timpul sezonului.
Si eu as prefera uneori linistea din iarna, doar sa nu dureze prea mult. Insa daca as avea de ales, as alege categoric lumea cu agitatia ei, pentru ca, in fond, pentru asta iubim noi vama, nu pentru o plaja goala.
Bine, acum nu stiu cat mai este de adevarat, gandesc asa mai mult de dragul vremurilor bune - daca anul asta crezi ca nu se poate mai rau, anul viitor constati ca te-ai inselat.
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i-msolastsummer In reply to MePokeYou [2010-07-20 13:16:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you find it like this.
I would've loved to be a little more hoarded in composition but my camera isn't that pro.
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MMMurdock [2010-07-16 15:31:34 +0000 UTC]
I like that shot! It's so tidy and calm but also threatening.
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i-msolastsummer In reply to MMMurdock [2010-07-20 13:11:06 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it, but why do you find it threatening ?
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MMMurdock In reply to i-msolastsummer [2010-07-24 20:46:05 +0000 UTC]
Not really threatening but gloomy because of the sky.
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